Tropical Haiku

anticlockwise winds
low atmospheric pressure
tropical cyclone


Written 25th September 2018.
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George Avatar
June 2, 2022 at 5:14 AM
Cyclones occur more frequently, these days ! You have analysed the scientific reason for it ! Well written haiku....
Cunningham Avatar
June 2, 2022 at 11:08 AM
Thank you very much Valsa, thankfully we don't have them here. Tom
Rodrigues Avatar
November 27, 2018 at 7:22 AM
Nice description...you have our heads churning in your direction.
Cunningham Avatar
November 27, 2018 at 12:32 PM
Thank you Kim, have only seen them on TV, wouldn't fancy being too close. Tom.
Ashley Avatar
October 8, 2018 at 1:40 PM
Your imagery is devastatingly beautiful, Tom. I love the movement and energy in this haiku. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan
Cunningham Avatar
October 8, 2018 at 2:07 PM
Thank you Susan, they are indeed devastating, mother nature at her worst. Tom.
Sietesantos Avatar
September 28, 2018 at 10:59 AM
I've experienced a couple of those devastating cyclones and this tropical haiku is on point! Excellent write, my friend! Hugs Pandita
Cunningham Avatar
September 28, 2018 at 11:28 AM
Thanks Pandita, it must have been terryfying for you, I've only seen them on TV, they are devastating. Tom
Onclaud Avatar
September 27, 2018 at 2:01 PM
more tropical cyclones coming in tempestuous rolls, tom...marvelous write.. huggs
Cunningham Avatar
September 27, 2018 at 3:20 PM
Thank you Nette, thankfully I've never experienced one in real life only seen them on TV. I've soupmailed you. Tom
Salehi Avatar
September 27, 2018 at 12:30 AM
If it clockwise then becomes anticyclone...interesting, isn't it.
Cunningham Avatar
September 27, 2018 at 1:20 AM
It is Pashang, our extreme weather, although devastating is fascinating too. Tom
Dietrich Avatar
September 26, 2018 at 3:20 PM
Yep, that is it, Tom!! (I'm glad i am not in the eye of a tropical storm!!)
Cunningham Avatar
September 26, 2018 at 11:10 PM
Me too Andrea, so sad when you watch TV and see the devastation it leaves in its wake, people losing everything they own. The power of notice nature should never be under estimated. Tom
Krutsinger Avatar
September 26, 2018 at 7:07 AM
You had me at the first word, a new one for me which is sweet; nice one.
Cunningham Avatar
September 26, 2018 at 7:52 AM
Thank you very much Caren Tom
One Avatar
September 25, 2018 at 1:33 PM
Great ku... sounds stormy!
Cunningham Avatar
September 25, 2018 at 1:47 PM
Thanks S.O. , tropics are paradise but saw the after math of one of these in Dominica, the devastation was unbelievable. Tom
Trifiatis Avatar
September 25, 2018 at 12:36 PM
I felt it today dear, Tom here in Greece and tomorrow the winds will get stronger! Brilliant Haiku my friend!
Cunningham Avatar
September 25, 2018 at 1:14 PM
Thank you Demetrios ,Yes I heard the winds would increase tomorrow, its getting breezy here now. Tom
Pandit Avatar
September 25, 2018 at 7:25 AM
The first two lines evoke the onset of the third..well articulated, Tom.
Cunningham Avatar
September 25, 2018 at 8:36 AM
Thank you Vijay, a horrific experience for sure, to have to ride out one of these storms', a high price to pay for living there. Tom
Warrior Avatar
September 25, 2018 at 6:50 AM
Nice place to visit...not sure about living there lol...none the less, it's the haiku tropics...great write Tom...love & tropics...^WW^
Cunningham Avatar
September 25, 2018 at 8:33 AM
Thanks WW, they look beautiful in pictures with palm trees and white sands but the weather, when it kicks off is something else. Tom
Rodrigues Avatar
September 24, 2018 at 8:57 PM
Love all the torquing in this image! Awesome, Tom!
Cunningham Avatar
September 24, 2018 at 9:06 PM
Thank you Kim when tropical weather is at its worst its devastating,I have seen the devestation it leaves in its wake. Tom
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