Tropic Sea

Tropic Sea
Wet and wild, greedy waves lick beaches... washing long lost secrets back to shore Aquamarine warm waters kissing deep blue sky decorated with smiling islands in the sun Tranquil haven or raging tempest dead calm before a storm… Tropic Sea
06-13-2014 Contest: Theme #6 - The Sea- (Old & New) Poems (01-18-2016) Sponsor: SKAT A Placement: 7th Contest: Choose Your Favorite Body (06-15-2015) Sponsor: Andrea Dietrich Placement: 3rd
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A   Avatar
February 7, 2016 at 11:50 AM
Pandita, i love this site.. that is why i do it
A   Avatar
January 28, 2016 at 9:40 PM
PANDITA, Congrats on your awesome win. I'm so behind here, the SEA theme is perfect. Love LINDA
Sietesantos Avatar
January 29, 2016 at 2:37 PM
:-) Thank you so much, my friend for your continued compliments and suppor! All the best. Pandita
A  Avatar
January 18, 2016 at 11:23 PM
Pandita, Congratulations on your Fine Sea win... Stop by my latest blog "This is HOW I FEEL" if you'd like. LOVE SKAT
Sietesantos Avatar
January 19, 2016 at 8:13 AM
Yippee! Many thanks, Skat, for placing this piece on your winners' list! Warmest regards. Pandita
A. Sharma Avatar
January 18, 2016 at 11:01 PM
Very wonderful write Pandita.. loved reading this morning.. congrats on big win!
Sietesantos Avatar
January 19, 2016 at 8:12 AM
Thank you, dear Dr, Sharma, for your wonderful compliments! Have a great day! Pandita
Duncan Avatar
August 19, 2015 at 12:08 AM
Love this little piece. the one line ( washing long lost secrets back to shore ) reminds me of my poem Sparkling Pebbles, there is a beach here in calif that washes polished glass back to shore. Oh, thank you for coming to read my Flickering Shadows :)
Sietesantos Avatar
August 19, 2015 at 2:35 PM
Dear Debbie, I am so glad you stopped by and selected this piece to read. I very much appreciate your encouragement, support, and lovely compliments! Always the best to you! Pandita
Ayala Avatar
August 29, 2014 at 8:17 PM
This piece makes me feel so nostalgic for my childhood home! Thank you for sharing this amazing write! Kika
Sietesantos Avatar
August 29, 2014 at 9:39 PM
The sea is very special to me too and I tried to do it justice in this lovely form! Thank you Kika. Pandita
Dome Avatar
June 28, 2014 at 8:02 AM
I love this great poem so much. i like the orginal take and certain words like greedy, licking the shore. A classic write and all time favourite to me. very inspirational. Hope you won. it's a winner for me. well done. Best wishes Pete. much enjoyed.
Sietesantos Avatar
June 28, 2014 at 4:31 PM
Hi Pete, thank you so very much for your kind comments and compliments. I did receive a win on this one and I am glad that you enjoyed it. Thank you, my friend, for the support and encouragement.
Gregory Avatar
June 23, 2014 at 10:30 AM
great write pandita... i love this piece truly i am awed...
Sietesantos Avatar
June 23, 2014 at 7:47 PM
Thank you, Weston my friend, for your wonderful compliments!
Marcum Wong Avatar
June 18, 2014 at 4:10 PM
I see why this poem scored high Pandita. Your imagery is astounding! Living here in Hawaii you describe a tropic sea wonderfully. Congratulations on your win!
Sietesantos Avatar
June 18, 2014 at 7:38 PM
Connie, you honor me with your praise! Thank you for the applause. One day I wish to visit Hawaii and see that tropical splendor in person! Have an enjoyable day!
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
June 18, 2014 at 5:58 AM
:D wow!!! i love the imagery you created it goes deep tickling my senses.. :D!!! kudos PAndita. :D!
Sietesantos Avatar
June 18, 2014 at 8:22 AM
Thank you, dear Olive, for visiting and for the wonderful compliments! Kindest regards, my friend!
Mahur Avatar
June 18, 2014 at 3:33 AM
Dear poet, it is a nice work of imagery. Thanks for your comments on my poem.
Sietesantos Avatar
June 18, 2014 at 8:19 AM
Thank you, my friend, for visiting and for the kind compliments! Kindest wishes.
Gibson Avatar
June 16, 2014 at 8:32 PM
Delicious, Pandita. Congratulations.
Sietesantos Avatar
June 16, 2014 at 8:36 PM
Hi Faye, thank you so much, my friend for your sweet compliment!
Kendrick Avatar
June 16, 2014 at 3:19 PM
I may copy and paste congrats but I have read your work and find it of exceptional quality. Sara
Sietesantos Avatar
June 16, 2014 at 4:25 PM
My dear Sara, thank you so much for your wonderful compliments which continue to inspire me! I am learning every day from the great poets such as yourself. Thank you again!
Fraser Avatar
June 15, 2014 at 11:49 PM
This is a wonderful piece you have written on the sea Pandita, im a sailor and you have described it perfectly, congrats, Carl
Sietesantos Avatar
June 16, 2014 at 7:27 AM
Hi Carl, thank you, so much for taking time to stop by and comment.. I appreciate your kind compliments and I am so glad you enjoyed it!
A  Avatar
June 15, 2014 at 8:04 PM
Wonderful win Pandita..... SKAT
Sietesantos Avatar
June 15, 2014 at 8:06 PM
SKAT, many thanks for your kind compliment which means a lot to me, my friend!
Devonshire Avatar
June 15, 2014 at 6:32 PM
Dear Pandita, a wonderful description of this Tropic Sea. When I read the line "dead calm before a storm," I remembered that we are now in hurricane season. Hope you don't have any "raging tempest" heading your way. Congratulations! Love, carolyn
Sietesantos Avatar
June 15, 2014 at 7:21 PM
Hi Carolyn, many thanks for your wonderful compliments that I always appreciate! No raging tempests right now:-) but it is time to be on the look-out! Have an enjoyable evening!
Johnson Avatar
June 15, 2014 at 2:33 PM
Lovely poem congratualtions on your win. Love, joyce
Sietesantos Avatar
June 15, 2014 at 4:43 PM
Thank you so much, my friend. As always I appreciate your sweet compliments, Joyce. Have a great evening!
Richards Avatar
June 15, 2014 at 11:49 AM
Love this !! "washing secrets back to shore".....that is a terrific line, Pandita!! Congratulations!!
Sietesantos Avatar
June 15, 2014 at 11:53 AM
Hi Carrie, thank you so much for your sweet compliments which I so appreciate as usual! Have a great day!
Smith Avatar
June 15, 2014 at 10:43 AM
Pandita, congrats on a great win!.. decorated with smiling islands... Love it!!.. Hugs.. Arlene..
Sietesantos Avatar
June 15, 2014 at 11:47 AM
Many thanks, Arlene, for your great compliments. I enjoyed writing this one:-). Have a nice day!
Gorelick Avatar
June 15, 2014 at 9:57 AM
Congrats dear on a nice win. the last bit is terrific..BG
Sietesantos Avatar
June 15, 2014 at 11:46 AM
Hi Barbara, thank you so very much and I truly appreciate your compliments as usual!
May Avatar
June 15, 2014 at 6:34 AM
Congrats on a great win Pandita
Sietesantos Avatar
June 15, 2014 at 11:45 AM
Hi Joseph, many thanks for your kind compliments. I very much appreciate it!
Gwynne-Galfe Avatar
June 15, 2014 at 4:47 AM
Pandita! As a ocean and beach lover I could totally feel the waves hit my body while looking out onto the horizon dreaming of better days.....you used creative words explaining what you feel when thinking or being at the ocean. Thank you for sharing. I truly enjoyed reading it. Congrats on your well deserved win!
Sietesantos Avatar
June 15, 2014 at 11:44 AM
Hi Susan, thank you so much for visiting and for your wonderful compliments which I truly appreciate! I felt such sweet nostalgia writing this one. Kindest regards.
A. Sharma Avatar
June 15, 2014 at 4:19 AM
Pandita this is really wonderful ! Congrats on a well deserved great win !
Sietesantos Avatar
June 15, 2014 at 11:40 AM
Dr. Upma, many thanks for your kind compliments. I very much appreciate it!
Callus Avatar
June 15, 2014 at 4:03 AM
This is so beautiful and vivid, Pandita! Most enjoyable. Congrats on a merited win. // paul
Sietesantos Avatar
June 15, 2014 at 11:42 AM
Hi Paul, thank you so very much for your usual kind compliments and support!
Mehta Avatar
June 15, 2014 at 1:16 AM
Fine choice of the water of the body and fine win. Congrats, Pandita
Sietesantos Avatar
June 15, 2014 at 11:39 AM
Dr. Ram, many thanks for your kind compliments. I very much appreciate it!
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