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Trochee, Trochee

Falling drifting leaves by the wind blown around
Crashing rolling waves the sound sighing echoes
Sadness hollow winter comes whipping nature
Chilling the ground solid

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Don Johnson

June 10, 2011 at 6:40 PM

See the flutter of the leaves, crashing water's , chilling freeze. Great poem babe, xo, Don

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

June 4, 2011 at 5:07 PM

bright and vivid imagery Sara.. luv the double title ..so uplifting and energetic .. nice one my friend ..

Andrea Dietrich

June 2, 2011 at 10:09 PM

I see you have attempted this form too. frankly, it's so foreign to me, I can't even recall how the meter should be. I have to have it right in front of me like a musician looking at his sheet music,how to do it! Anyway, YOUR poem here. I really like it, Sara. It captures the mood of a cold windy winter day!!

Jack Horne

June 2, 2011 at 7:01 AM

Lovely write, Sara. I thought this form looked interesting when Andrea used it recently, but I was daunted by how difficult it seems. You and Andrea made it look so easy! Well done indeed : ) So glad the little Princess is doing so well

Dr.Ram Mehta

June 1, 2011 at 6:26 PM

It seels to be a nice form to write on , sara. I have not attempted yet

Joyce Johnson

June 1, 2011 at 4:58 PM

I'm not acquainted with this form, I will look it up. Lovely writing. Thank you for your comment on my Poetry Soup Convention. How is everyone? I am still distracted by my brother's illness and it is hard to keep up here. Love, Joyce