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Trochee-Percy's Pre-Dic-Ament

Percy's pickle pointed west Larry's pointed down Little Mary looked perplexed Percy grinned and clowned. Mary's small feet kept abreast Larry looked around 'Till a tree limb snagged her dress making Mary frown.

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/2/2012 8:22:00 PM

DEBBIE, a wonderful congratulations in Andrea's 7/5 TROCHEE contest~ :-) PD

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 6/1/2012 1:01:00 AM

Congrats on your win, Debbie! Your entry was my favorite. So cute! Love and Blessings, Rhonda

Josie Whitehead

Date: 5/31/2012 7:24:00 AM

Congratulations on your win Debbie. It would be strange if you hadn't won!

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 5/30/2012 6:54:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Andrea's "The 7/5 Trochee" contest Debbie. Love, Carol

Joann Grisetti

Date: 5/29/2012 11:58:00 AM

Very humorous -well done. Congratulations.

David Williams

Date: 5/29/2012 1:42:00 AM

DEbbie, congrats on your win..David

Deborah Burch

Date: 5/29/2012 12:20:00 AM

Congratulations on your win, Debbie :-) *curtsey* ...lol love ya, deb

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/29/2012 12:18:00 AM

Debs, I had to do a double take with yours and then I looked at the title and totally got it! wish you had called it a pickle or something in the next to last line. hahaha. Perfect meter, my friend. Congrats!

Kathryn Collins

Date: 5/12/2012 6:28:00 AM

Dear Debbie - Do I detect a bit of naughtiness here? Very original. love, Kathy

Jack Horne

Date: 5/11/2012 2:50:00 PM

lol, great fun here, debs. many congrats on all your wins, my friend

Lucilla Carrillo

Date: 5/11/2012 8:28:00 AM

Debbie; this is good I really enjoyed it very much. Lucilla

Syed Amaan Ahmad

Date: 5/10/2012 11:38:00 AM

Well, yeah maybe I can and well, I did not write that poem for the contest. I dont write specifically for contests. Most of my poems/stories are when I "hold my spirits" lol... you know what I mean? So, I just came across his contest and therefore, I entered. Winning or losing doesnt matter. I write randomly and not to win/lose but cuz I cant hold my thoughts in my head, especially, when my spirits want to escape from me... lol... it's just that words come to my head and I put them on. lol. hugs

Syed Amaan Ahmad

Date: 5/10/2012 8:21:00 AM

1)Finished 3 large Carlsberg, 90ml JW, 4 shots Absolut mins before I wrote that. Well, nobody knows when I'm drunk or sober. I know,kinda eccentric,so I can understand why I "didnt" sound drunk. Also,it doesnt necessarily mean that words should "beee likkee dis wen a persn is draaank" 2) I'm Agnostic; therefore I hold no interest in following Holy Books. And I dont "struggle to write". 3) Baffling = Sarcasm (but in a positive/friendly way) since it was simple (cute, nice) Hugs, love and peace :)

Gert W. Knop

Date: 5/10/2012 12:11:00 AM

Hi Debbie, thank you for your kind comment on my photo! Great write! Hope you're well...Gert:)

Syed Amaan Ahmad

Date: 5/9/2012 11:11:00 PM

Sounds like a rhyme for a 2-year-old toddler. You're good at it. ;)

Debbie Guzzi
Date: 5/10/2012 6:13:00 AM

yup yup...you see many children's writes use this form of meter!!

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 5/9/2012 7:41:00 PM

Debbie, this is terrific! Simply hilarious...I predict a winner. Thanks for the chuckle. Blessings, Rhonda