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Formed from varied wombs, love vessels so-called we painstakingly faced the reality of growing up together though nurtured … with compassion in one big home--- ... propelled by care-givers toward triumphant journey. While learning about family matters our minds were confronted on parents’ whereabouts then struggled to relate midst partnership endeavours--- ... till prayerfully overcoming belongingness-insecurity. In our status as once abandoned and orphaned children surrendered, not by our choice, to a residential institution never did we know our foot steps’ advancement--- ... but are now assured of soul-assurance vis-à-vis eternal destiny. Grateful to have been adopted and fostered our hearts praise the Lord for His sovereign provisions leading us, through faith, to salvation-islands along rescue streams--- ... today, we're enabled to reach-out by His HIS grace* voluntarily.
*Ephesians 2:8 For by grace are ye saved through faith; and that not of yourselves: it is the gift of God. October 11, 2021 4th place, "Islands in the Stream" Poetry Writing Contest Sponsored by Craig Cornish; judged on 10/14/2021.

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Date: 10/15/2021 8:58:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. Your "TRIUMPHANT JOURNEY" is a beautiful story/write. Have a blessed autumn day...................
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Date: 10/14/2021 8:48:00 PM
A beautiful Work! Congratulations!
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Date: 10/12/2021 1:21:00 PM
Beautiful writing. God bless you sweet lady. Love you, Gina
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Date: 10/11/2021 9:11:00 PM
I think people who adopt children are simply amazing, so many need a good home, thank you for highlighting such an important issue :)
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 10/11/2021 9:23:00 PM
I couldn't have said it better!!!

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