Tripping the Light

I tripped the light pretty well,
but not as good as I should - 
It should have been fantastic,
but it was only pretty good.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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Aldana Avatar
January 3, 2026 at 11:57 PM
• Fun • Short & Sweet • I Love Your Rhyming Poetry • Enjoyable
Crandall Avatar
January 4, 2026 at 8:38 AM
Thanks, Keyonda!
Wolf Avatar
January 3, 2026 at 8:41 PM
I thought it was the LIGHT fantastic. Isn't it? ~ Self-Doubter
Crandall Avatar
January 4, 2026 at 8:37 AM
What - isn't that what I put? Or more correctly, thanks - good catch! I just re-wrote and retitled!
Rodrigues Avatar
January 3, 2026 at 5:14 PM
There is still something to say about pretty good ;)
Crandall Avatar
January 4, 2026 at 8:38 AM
Yep, to heck with perfectionism!
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