Tripping

Tripping

She's tripping over memories
of those red flags she had.
It seems to her the good times
are far outweighed by bad.

She's running out of patience
she's run out of things to say.
She asked God give me one reason
to make me want to stay.

She listened for a moment
to the silence in the air.
She smiled and said there ain't one
or like me You just don't care.

She packed up her belongings
and she called a moving van.
She could have trained an army
with the time spent on one man.

She smiled again as she thought about
when he walked in that door.
When he sees what didn't matter
matters less now than before.

She left a table by his easy chair
and by the lamp she left a note.
She wondered if he'd bother
even reading what she wrote.

This song and dance was over
long before it even started.
You took me for a fool
that you easily outsmarted.

No good deed goes unpunished
now my good deeds are through.
The kind of man you chose to be
has now caught up to you.

There's warm beer on the counter
your dog is at your brothers.
Don't bother trying to call me
I'll be staying at your mothers.

Edwin C Hofert
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Barclay Avatar
March 27, 2015 at 8:14 AM
Nice easy read, I wonder how many men do not put in the effort all the best Bernie
Staton Avatar
March 27, 2015 at 5:27 AM
Edwin I found this poem very easy to read. Nice flow. Look forward to reading more of your work. Welcome to poetrysoup!!
Waldrop Avatar
March 26, 2015 at 11:35 PM
I can also see how your poems can be made into country music I enjoyed it.
White Avatar
March 26, 2015 at 5:07 PM
Great poetry, Tripping is definitely, "gripping" excellent work.
White Avatar
March 26, 2015 at 5:04 PM
Great poetry, Tripping is definitely, "gripping" excellent work. Pauline White
Timperley Avatar
March 26, 2015 at 2:22 PM
I don't get the 1st 2 lines of the penultimate verse, but enjoyed it anyway. God Bless. D.
Karim Avatar
March 26, 2015 at 2:01 PM
Great write!
Cook Avatar
March 26, 2015 at 1:19 PM
Poetry is as vast as the universe. Delivery is what keeps ones attention. The content tells the story and opens windows and doors to one's imagination. Poet my Friend, you achieve nthe goals. thanks for a delite. RAVENLEE
Harper Avatar
March 26, 2015 at 12:52 PM
Edwin: Very good. I see someone has commented on another of your poems saying it would fit a country song (I paraphrase) and I can see that. Many of 'smaller' ones are ripe for that treatment. Congratulations.
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