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Triple Decastich-Seven Days Doing Good Deeds

If I had seven days, I'd feed the hungry... give milk formulas to the needy mothers of the suckling babies who can't be breast-fed; what a big smile I'd put on every infant's face! And from within, I'd certainly feel a joy never experienced before! I wouldn't stop there, I'd continue searching for them... for those children who ask for bread, and a bottle of spring water... if I were the Pope, I'd sell all the gold in Vatican City and make them full, hoping that others will follow his example! Why do they have to die uselessly; has society turned away from human compassion? If I had seven days to do as I please, I would be an ambassador for peace, stop the violence which causes wars by asking nations to come together and negotiate... I would be much delighted to see them shake hands! Some will listen, some will not and despite their negative reaction, I will try to convince them with an imposing voice that they will be sorry for the destruction which will come!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 10/29/2010 3:36:00 PM
Congrats, Andy. Excellent write. Nice going. Ralph
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Date: 10/28/2010 2:29:00 PM
a very inspirational piece Andrew, such a selfless way to spend your week, congrats on your win in the contest
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Date: 10/28/2010 12:21:00 AM
Andrew Congrats on notching 1st place in contest.... Luv/Best wishes .....Hitendra Mehta
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Date: 10/27/2010 5:08:00 PM
Congratulations Andrew, a poem well worthy of a top spot. Wnjoy the glory. Agape, Moses
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Date: 10/27/2010 2:31:00 PM
Yes, I remember this fine entry in the contest. Congratulatations, dear Andrew
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Date: 10/27/2010 1:10:00 PM
Congratulations on this well deserved win, Andrew
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Date: 10/27/2010 12:42:00 PM
Congrats Andrew on your first place win in Carol's contest with this amazing entry my friend.. enjoy your top spot with your peers today with luv..
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Date: 10/27/2010 12:26:00 PM
Congratulations and thank you Andrew for taking the time to enter my contest. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/5/2010 4:14:00 AM
Very nice and interesting plan to pass a week with positive deeds. Good luck in the contest, Andrew
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Date: 10/4/2010 9:11:00 PM
Andrew, I think you could do the first stanza farily easily. The last two might be rather difficult to accomplish but they are great and worthy wishes. You have a great heart and this is a heartfelt poem. LUv, Andrea
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