Triolet No 4

A wider landscape I see beyond;
It beckons to me from afar.
The land has a kaleidoscope dawn
And many wonders that lay beyond.
Run your hands over its grasses blonde;
Catch a whiff of its sacred rose attar.
To a kinder landscape I go beyond;
Someday it will beckon no more.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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December 24, 2024 at 1:00 PM
“The land has a kaleidoscopic dawn” is such a beautiful line of poetry.
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