Yoni Dvorkis Poet Quatrain

Trinity

I have slipped into the sorrow
and now I climb back out.
I foresee a great tomorrow
when I will feel no doubt.

Many times I reach the border
where words do pass and fade.
I rest my head on golden shoulder
and hear my serenade.

Quiet eyes do love me surely.
The gentle holds my hand.
See how light can shine so purely.
I hope I understand.

Presence I have known forever,
in one where once was three.
The secret to eternal life
is just Him, You, and Me.

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Hgarvey Daniel Esquire March 19, 2009 at 2:33 PM Dear Yoni, I think we are of kindred Spirit I have a POEM " Trinity in Haiku " But to YOUR disappointment I again used the name of Jesus YOU are a very well versed POET Marvelous Write Yes : Black is Hatred, anger, sorrow, loneliness, pain and Death RED -- LOVE Yes the Tears are Blood in my "The Birth of a Black Heart" and this POEM is the beginning of my " the POETS' Heart -- Speaks (Part 4) Yet to be posted ALWAYS YOURS...HG

February 26, 2009 at 4:38 PM What an inspirational and uplifting poem. Nice use of rhyme. Keep on writing. Karen

Carolyn Devonshire February 21, 2009 at 5:52 PM Dear Yoni, another great poem! I love the image conveyed in the second stanze, "rest my head on golden shoulder and hear my serenade." And the last four lines are spiritually inspiring. Love, Carolyn

Michael Degenhardt February 11, 2009 at 12:59 PM Oh wow, this read is so cool! love the easy flow and the true deep meaning within this. Keep em coming! Michael

Sara Lokken February 9, 2009 at 5:14 PM This is very inspirational....and beautifully rhymed. I've been running from religion, but I believe in God....I'm just really confused right now, I guess...but I'm not stupid enough to say I don't need Him. I'm just too dark or have seen too much too soon to fit into that whole church equation thing. I appreciate all your comments....you seem very 'real'.....Best wishes, Sara:)

Donna Newton February 8, 2009 at 6:26 PM I like too

Donna Newton February 8, 2009 at 6:19 PM RE: the ultimate sin---- married or you are of christian faith!........wink...)

Derrick Burton February 7, 2009 at 8:41 AM great poetry and beautiful words. Really loved how you just used your amagination and pushed this poetry forward. enjoyed reading it and have a blessed day.

Carrie Richards February 6, 2009 at 5:39 PM This is very lovely, quiet and lovely. ~ Carrie

Michael Jordan February 6, 2009 at 4:30 PM Yoni - this is an excellent Quatrain - I loved the ending - i want to let you know I received your email and asap I'll make a PDF of the poems and shoot them to you - Antoinette is my wife in case you were wondering about my address - God Bless, MJ