Trim Trimmer Chicken Dinner Winner

I don’t know tic tac toe
so I rhyme this with flow,
showing Nick Nac knows 
how to serve the perfect dose.

Measuring the rhymes
like I’m pleasuring the lines,
leisure for the minds
like I’m lemon and I’m lime,

1st and 2nd personalities 
pushed to share realities, 
combining combat and comebacks 
as I incompetently rap,

you’re ripping me now 
it’s a banter attack,
shyt but gripping somehow
as I pant and sound crap.

It’s another chicken dinner 
from Mr Trim Trimmer, 
not a rapper or a singer
but, a mother loving winner.

POTD 02/02/2019
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Marcum Wong Avatar
April 28, 2019 at 6:14 AM
Congratulations on your deserving win in Richard's contest Nick. Belated Congratulations for POTD! : )
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April 25, 2019 at 9:35 AM
Congrats on your win, thanks for entering my contest.
Flaherty Avatar
March 2, 2019 at 6:01 PM
What's your Rap Name T-Diddy
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February 26, 2019 at 9:21 AM
This is awesome Nick! Belated POTD congratulations! xomo :)
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February 19, 2019 at 10:05 AM
Sorry for the late thankyous people, I had a bit of a situation and totally forgot lol
Gauthier Avatar
February 11, 2019 at 9:01 PM
A fun poem, Nick. Congrats on your POTD. A FAVE. LOL
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February 19, 2019 at 10:05 AM
Thanks Line :)
Kucharek Avatar
February 8, 2019 at 5:44 PM
That is a tongue twister but so light and fancy Free! The images I had, had me smiling the whole time I read it! Congrats! On your win! ....sherilynn
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February 19, 2019 at 10:06 AM
Thank you Sherilynn :)
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February 3, 2019 at 1:51 PM
- Congratulations on your p.o.t.d., Nick :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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February 19, 2019 at 10:09 AM
Thank you Sunshine Lady Anne-Lise :) i'm glad you enjoyed my piece, peace lol
Cunningham Avatar
February 3, 2019 at 12:59 AM
Told you nic nac is back. Congrats on POTD.
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February 19, 2019 at 10:12 AM
You did Tom, I'm a bit hit and miss though, come and go, one good poem then one "oh no", thanks for congratulating my post, my reply is late i''m sorry bro lol
Roper Avatar
February 2, 2019 at 8:08 PM
Nick,I enjoyed reading :) . Congratulations on your win..Hugs Eve ~`*
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February 19, 2019 at 10:14 AM
Thanks Eve, I'm glad you had an enjoyable read, happy times I believe, I'm grateful you did comment indeed, now it's time for me to leave lol
Mishra Avatar
February 2, 2019 at 7:41 PM
Nice rhyme.... Congratulations on POTD
Kitchin Avatar
February 2, 2019 at 4:41 PM
Awesome, congratulations on POTD!
Sands Avatar
February 2, 2019 at 1:38 PM
Congratulations for POTD :)
Awtry Avatar
February 2, 2019 at 1:07 PM
but, a mother loving winner.--Well, yes you are!! Congrats on your honors in the Marathon and for POTD!!! BRAVO!
Warrior Avatar
February 2, 2019 at 10:27 AM
Funny punny...Congrats!!! on POTD!! Nick...love & light...^WW^
Ifeanyichukwu Avatar
February 2, 2019 at 9:23 AM
Good work, good use of puns, Nick
Smith Avatar
February 2, 2019 at 9:17 AM
Congratulations Nick for POTD honors...
One Avatar
February 2, 2019 at 7:13 AM
Congrats on POTD Nick..
Trim Avatar
February 2, 2019 at 7:19 AM
Thank you SW :)
May Avatar
February 2, 2019 at 6:56 AM
This is great, Congratulations on POTD
Trim Avatar
February 2, 2019 at 7:05 AM
Thank you Bobby :)
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February 1, 2019 at 7:42 PM
Nick, this one was fun! I read this with a nic nac paddywhack and then I gave my dog a bone! I don't know why but I have to Fav this one :) Congratulations on your win on mile 15 of my 2019 Poetry Marathon Contest. Thank you so much for supporting my contests. By continuing to place in the contests you are accumulating points toward the final. ~Mark
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February 1, 2019 at 8:59 PM
Thanks Mark, :) I'm happy for you and your dog lol I've entered every contest and this is the first top 10 lol, thanks for doing the contests :)
Cunningham Avatar
February 1, 2019 at 4:33 AM
The master is back , love the bounce to this. Tom.
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February 1, 2019 at 8:10 AM
lol Thanks Tom
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