Trim Trimmer Chicken Dinner Winner

I don’t know tic tac toe
so I rhyme this with flow,
showing Nick Nac knows 
how to serve the perfect dose.

Measuring the rhymes
like I’m pleasuring the lines,
leisure for the minds
like I’m lemon and I’m lime,

1st and 2nd personalities 
pushed to share realities, 
combining combat and comebacks 
as I incompetently rap,

you’re ripping me now 
it’s a banter attack,
shyt but gripping somehow
as I pant and sound crap.

It’s another chicken dinner 
from Mr Trim Trimmer, 
not a rapper or a singer
but, a mother loving winner.

POTD 02/02/2019
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019


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Date: 4/28/2019 6:14:00 AM
Congratulations on your deserving win in Richard's contest Nick. Belated Congratulations for POTD! : )
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Date: 4/25/2019 9:35:00 AM
Congrats on your win, thanks for entering my contest.
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Date: 3/2/2019 6:01:00 PM
What's your Rap Name T-Diddy
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Date: 2/26/2019 9:21:00 AM
This is awesome Nick! Belated POTD congratulations! xomo :)
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Date: 2/19/2019 10:05:00 AM
Sorry for the late thankyous people, I had a bit of a situation and totally forgot lol
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Date: 2/11/2019 9:01:00 PM
A fun poem, Nick. Congrats on your POTD. A FAVE. LOL
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Nick Trim
Date: 2/19/2019 10:05:00 AM
Thanks Line :)
Date: 2/8/2019 5:44:00 PM
That is a tongue twister but so light and fancy Free! The images I had, had me smiling the whole time I read it! Congrats! On your win! ....sherilynn
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Date: 2/19/2019 10:06:00 AM
Thank you Sherilynn :)
Date: 2/3/2019 1:51:00 PM
- Congratulations on your p.o.t.d., Nick :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Nick Trim
Date: 2/19/2019 10:09:00 AM
Thank you Sunshine Lady Anne-Lise :) i'm glad you enjoyed my piece, peace lol
Date: 2/3/2019 12:59:00 AM
Told you nic nac is back. Congrats on POTD.
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Nick Trim
Date: 2/19/2019 10:12:00 AM
You did Tom, I'm a bit hit and miss though, come and go, one good poem then one "oh no", thanks for congratulating my post, my reply is late i''m sorry bro lol
Date: 2/2/2019 8:08:00 PM
Nick,I enjoyed reading :) . Congratulations on your win..Hugs Eve ~`*
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Date: 2/19/2019 10:14:00 AM
Thanks Eve, I'm glad you had an enjoyable read, happy times I believe, I'm grateful you did comment indeed, now it's time for me to leave lol
Date: 2/2/2019 7:41:00 PM
Nice rhyme.... Congratulations on POTD
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Date: 2/2/2019 4:41:00 PM
Awesome, congratulations on POTD!
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Date: 2/2/2019 1:38:00 PM
Congratulations for POTD :)
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Date: 2/2/2019 1:07:00 PM
but, a mother loving winner.--Well, yes you are!! Congrats on your honors in the Marathon and for POTD!!! BRAVO!
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Date: 2/2/2019 10:27:00 AM
Funny punny...Congrats!!! on POTD!! Nick...love & light...^WW^
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Date: 2/2/2019 9:23:00 AM
Good work, good use of puns, Nick
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Date: 2/2/2019 9:17:00 AM
Congratulations Nick for POTD honors...
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Date: 2/2/2019 7:13:00 AM
Congrats on POTD Nick..
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Nick Trim
Date: 2/2/2019 7:19:00 AM
Thank you SW :)
Date: 2/2/2019 6:56:00 AM
This is great, Congratulations on POTD
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Nick Trim
Date: 2/2/2019 7:05:00 AM
Thank you Bobby :)
Date: 2/1/2019 7:42:00 PM
Nick, this one was fun! I read this with a nic nac paddywhack and then I gave my dog a bone! I don't know why but I have to Fav this one :) Congratulations on your win on mile 15 of my 2019 Poetry Marathon Contest. Thank you so much for supporting my contests. By continuing to place in the contests you are accumulating points toward the final. ~Mark
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Nick Trim
Date: 2/1/2019 8:59:00 PM
Thanks Mark, :) I'm happy for you and your dog lol I've entered every contest and this is the first top 10 lol, thanks for doing the contests :)
Date: 2/1/2019 4:33:00 AM
The master is back , love the bounce to this. Tom.
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Nick Trim
Date: 2/1/2019 8:10:00 AM
lol Thanks Tom
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