Trillenium Nine

	“Welcome”
a robot effigy of painted aluminium
on its face a vestigial smile
chill, uncharismatic and instant,
voicing through it
like rasping metallic file,
a platinum echo, distant.
Its unmoving countenance 
worn like a habit, a shiny mask, ill-fit
the smirk of a smile sewn on,
with crayon drawn on,
it did not move as if to prove
a robotic ability as ventriloquist.
I was transfixed
with words that keenly gnawed:
“You have been thawed.”

I looked around with icy perception,
with roving eye and no movement of limb,
where had I been?
As my body warmed and my limbs gained inflection,
so my mind was pierced with icicles of truth
of a previous existence and a distant youth.

It’s all coming back now,
it had worked somehow:
Cryogenics.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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Daniels Avatar
September 26, 2026 at 12:49 AM
Creepily cold, Pascal ! So happy God designed humans warm blooded. The poem begs the question > is the Ice Age of the past or futuristic ? My own view is that it is a simultaneous reality as all timelines exist in the now. This line in the poem, if I read it correctly, seems to agree : « of a previous existence and a distant youth. ». The poem becomes relevant now that AI can even create whole civilisations & could simulate weather conditions > all the more important to remain in the warm Heart so that when mind & memory moves backwards and forwards in space, our Beingness remain centred & grounded. Have a non-icicle weekend. 😊!
Borg Avatar
September 26, 2026 at 11:29 AM
Ghairo thank you for your comment and depth of understanding. To date there has been cryopreservation of humans as well as animals, but so far it is not known if it will ever work by bringing these back to life. Can you imagine being cryopreserved today and being brought back to life in a hundred year's time? Scary! AI wields such power and will wield even more if unchecked. Perhaps it may come up with the solution.
Sharma  Avatar
September 25, 2026 at 11:45 PM
Oh goshhhh the cryogenics! How coincidental it is that something that I'm working on academically includes the research and basis of cryogenic storage etc. And my field of study is mechatronics so the whole theme is very familiar! This poem really took me into the future world somehow, the whole sci-fi vibe but also feels much more frozen in time and then witnessing everything. Love your artistic wordsmithery throughout, dear Pascal, and also, "so my mind was pierced with icicles of truth of a previous existence and a distant youth." Just absolutely brilliant and very poignant! What a truly unique write that intrigues one's poetic mind! Pleasure reading this, very heartfelt and powerful, keep shininnn and writinnn always 💫💫✨✨🍁🍁
Borg Avatar
September 26, 2026 at 11:39 AM
Hiya, you're a wonder-woman! How you find time to write your wonderful poems, unselfishly comment on other people's poetry and still engage in such an important and powerful career is beyond me. What can I say? Except: more poetry please Wonder-Woman.
Dietrich Avatar
September 25, 2026 at 10:14 PM
Ohhh cool. Sci Fi - like writing. Reminded me a bit of Ray Bradbury. Well done!
Borg Avatar
September 26, 2026 at 11:53 AM
I am sure Bradbury would have a better description of robots in his sci-fi novels. I tried to model mine on what I see emerging from China.
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