Triggered Jealousy

Triggered Jealousy 

green eyes storms flares hot 
ruptured crust, hot lava, ash
drowning drifting calm


9/10/2015
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Dunn Avatar
September 21, 2015 at 8:04 PM
Dear Eve Congrads and well deserved on this marvelous piece of poetry, great job, cheri
Tor Avatar
September 17, 2015 at 7:13 PM
Eve congratulations on your win.
La France Avatar
September 16, 2015 at 4:19 PM
Eve, congratulations on your placement and thanks for visiting my poem, monsters ...
A. Sharma Avatar
September 15, 2015 at 11:56 PM
Wonderful write on jealousy Eve n a great win! Big congrats!
A  Avatar
September 15, 2015 at 11:21 PM
Eve, congratulations on your win. Thank you for the support. Love SKAT
Andresen Avatar
September 15, 2015 at 2:16 PM
- A very good comparison - Jealousy and a volcano !!! - Great written, Eve :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Boddie Avatar
September 15, 2015 at 11:23 AM
now that's a jealous rant....if that indeed was your stance....but what if I put in something new....something worthy of the Beauty of you....;)
Roper Avatar
September 15, 2015 at 1:18 PM
I would love it.....Eric I really have never been the jealous type. I went through life with the attitude they didn't want me that's fine I just walk away. My daddy had a spit fire jealous streak I guess that is why I did what I did. Hugs Eve
Lamoureux Avatar
September 15, 2015 at 8:27 AM
Well and emotive expressed piece.
Roper Avatar
September 15, 2015 at 1:19 PM
Thank you, Rick. Hugs Eve
Tor Avatar
September 15, 2015 at 1:10 AM
Eve very clever. Comparing the starting point of jealousy to a volcano.
Roper Avatar
September 15, 2015 at 1:20 PM
Thank you, Michael. Hugs Eve
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