Notes About The Poem

8/8/2020
~3rd Place ( shared)~ Same Old Song Poetry Contest, sponsored by Beth Evans

<em>"That's the Way I've Always Heard It Should Be" (1971) written by Carly Simon and Jacob Brackman.</em>


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Finally relaxing
on my high-rise roof
I notice you across the street on
your balcony seemingly aloof
listening to vintage Carly Simon, 
     "That’s the Way I’ve Always Heard it Should Be"

You stare my way and energetically waive

I hesitate, smile and then return the gesture

As if on cue you stand and press against the railing

Still smiling as my heart beats faster

"What's your name?" you playfully cry out 

"Who wants to know?" is my surprising reply
     Who really am I?

Sudden flashbacks hijack my thinking
     Song lyrics dredging up buried memories…

Why is this happening? Why am I sinking?
     Triggered

I hear your beseeching, unintelligible shouts as I retreat
Painful memories open like an oubliette under my feet—
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Lost and languishing in isolation's labyrinth
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Barry-Nishanian Avatar
February 12, 2021 at 2:32 PM
Congrats...late but congrats.
Toney Avatar
February 26, 2021 at 9:33 AM
Thank you, Barbara!
Hamilton Avatar
August 16, 2020 at 7:00 PM
Hey Mark, loved the write, Carly Simon is one of the best ever, glad you got placed in the contest, for me it is a top winner!
Toney Avatar
August 16, 2020 at 8:31 PM
Why thank you kind sir. It means a lot. ~Mark
Amadore Avatar
August 13, 2020 at 4:35 PM
Enjoyed your rooftop escapade, and I applaud your considerable restraint.
Toney Avatar
August 13, 2020 at 5:32 PM
Thank you, Leo. Best wishes to you. ~Mark
Faulkner Avatar
August 12, 2020 at 3:51 PM
I'm a Carly Simon fan, and I like what you did here, presenting her song as the backdrop to the story, and how it foretells the ending - best wishes for the contest!
Toney Avatar
August 13, 2020 at 5:33 PM
Thanks for the heads-up, Michelle.
Faulkner Avatar
August 13, 2020 at 3:33 PM
Sorry, I thought it was for the 'Same Old Song' contest, you should consider entering, if you haven't already-
Toney Avatar
August 12, 2020 at 7:18 PM
I appreciate your detailed observation, Michelle. What contest are you referring too? ~Mark
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