Tried Truly

Blustering tornadoes of ire spin from my head, the blipping computer lost its net, yet again. Even the background of rosy sundrenched sea does little to quell the storm which brews gremlins of an esoteric bent skid with ease from flat screen~ ~to flat screen attacking the saucy skirt of the satellite dish next… Soundless talking heads waggle tongues tuneless dog tails, tattling tirades~ Green around the gills I salmon toward the kitchen. going for tea but the gremlins get there first. The microwave is fried black~ leaving me with an empty cup on my knobby knees searching for the bone-dry kettle. Ah well, having rounded the last pedal of the third clover leaf ~’~ I smile, trouble only comes in three’s!
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Brown Avatar
September 26, 2012 at 5:09 AM
Congratulations on your win in Catie's contest Debbie. Love, Carol
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
September 26, 2012 at 12:31 AM
Awesome write an win, congratulations Debbie, and I wish they did only come in three's xx
Gasun Avatar
September 25, 2012 at 8:16 AM
An excellent write my dear Debbie! I love it. MY HUGE HEARTY CONGRATULATIONS ON YOUR WIN AND MY BELATED HAPPY, HAPPY BIRTHDAY GREETINGS, TOO. MAY YOU HAVE MORE POWER, BLESSINGS, AND BIRTHDAYS TO COME!!!! love and hugs:) Leonora
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September 25, 2012 at 7:27 AM
Congrats on your win for this lovely poem. Loved always, bl
Alvez Avatar
September 24, 2012 at 8:41 PM
Debbie, I'm smiling here! A delightful verse...Congratulations on your win...I am exciting standing with you! Cynthia
Alvez Avatar
September 24, 2012 at 8:45 PM
OOP! Debbie I intended to say I am excited ...not exciting...although that has been known to be true...lol Once again, I am excited to be with you in the winning circle. Cynthia
Goff Avatar
September 24, 2012 at 8:32 PM
Congrats back to you Deb! Thank you for your sweet words....I love the freedom of this fine poetry! You and your voice define "beautiful" jimmy
Marcum Wong Avatar
September 24, 2012 at 8:32 PM
Congratulations on your wonderful win with this clever entry Deb. It made me smile knowing it is all too true.
Merryman Avatar
September 24, 2012 at 7:47 PM
Debbie, congrats on your win with this fantastic poem! Love the imagery. Love, Kim
Arowolo Avatar
September 24, 2012 at 4:21 PM
Wonderful and great piece,Debbie..Congrats on your well deserved win in this contest..
Ali Bhat Avatar
September 24, 2012 at 12:11 PM
congratulations on ur win....:))
Grisetti Avatar
September 24, 2012 at 9:52 AM
Congratulations on oyur stunning poem winning. Such troubles are modern technologies.
A   Avatar
September 24, 2012 at 9:36 AM
Debbie :-). Congratulations with your awesome win in Catie's "Metaphorically Speaking" contest. Have yourself a nice day~ LUV*PD
Carrillo Avatar
September 21, 2012 at 5:47 PM
Well isn't that the truth. Smile and be happy. JESUS lioves you. Many blessings. Lucilla
Andresen Avatar
September 21, 2012 at 3:01 PM
Love it - well done Debbie. I smile to :) Have a wonderful weekend. oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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