Brenda Chiri Poet Free verse

Tricube Form

Breathless Sighs
Escape T'ween 
Parted Lips

                                   Whispered Words
                                        Of Passion
                                    Flow So Smooth

Gasps And Moans
Float Through Air
To Kiss You





This form was a challenge on another site call a tricube form...3 stanzas ,3 lines per stanza, and 3 syllables per line for a total of 27 syllables correct me if I am incorrect and you know the form!

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John Fleming October 24, 2019 at 10:16 AM Seems an awfully complicated way of constructing poetry? Intriguing though! :) john

Andrea Dietrich October 4, 2019 at 8:49 PM ooh la la!!! a sexy one. Brenda Chiri October 6, 2019 at 5:51 AM Lol thanks Andrea!;)

Chris Green October 4, 2019 at 1:09 PM I really enjoyed this form. A bit much for me to try but you did a really nice job with this. Brenda Chiri October 4, 2019 at 1:11 PM Thank you Chris bringing a smile to my face!;)

Gershon Wolf October 3, 2019 at 7:59 PM Neat, cool, elegant, and passionate --- all rolled into one wonderful write. I really like this form, Brenda. Lovely done. :) gw Brenda Chiri October 3, 2019 at 9:29 PM Thank you! It was kinda difficult to get to all go together but it was fun! Give it a try then let me know how you like it! Oh let me know if you do!;)