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Tricube Form

Breathless Sighs Escape T'ween Parted Lips Whispered Words Of Passion Flow So Smooth Gasps And Moans Float Through Air To Kiss You This form was a challenge on another site call a tricube form...3 stanzas ,3 lines per stanza, and 3 syllables per line for a total of 27 syllables correct me if I am incorrect and you know the form!

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John Fleming

Date: 10/24/2019 10:16:00 AM

Seems an awfully complicated way of constructing poetry? Intriguing though! :) john

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/4/2019 8:49:00 PM

ooh la la!!! a sexy one.

Brenda Chiri
Date: 10/6/2019 5:51:00 AM

Lol thanks Andrea!;)

Chris Green

Date: 10/4/2019 1:09:00 PM

I really enjoyed this form. A bit much for me to try but you did a really nice job with this.

Brenda Chiri
Date: 10/4/2019 1:11:00 PM

Thank you Chris bringing a smile to my face!;)

Gershon Wolf

Date: 10/3/2019 7:59:00 PM

Neat, cool, elegant, and passionate --- all rolled into one wonderful write. I really like this form, Brenda. Lovely done. :) gw

Brenda Chiri
Date: 10/3/2019 9:29:00 PM

Thank you! It was kinda difficult to get to all go together but it was fun! Give it a try then let me know how you like it! Oh let me know if you do!;)