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Tricks Are Treats

The once was an old private Dick who oft bought lottery quick picks Raja’s corner store sold tickets galore Dick went broke and paid him with tricks.

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Ralph Taylor

Date: 1/16/2012 8:35:00 PM

Congrats, Deb. Great limerick. Nice going. luv Ralph

Kim Merryman

Date: 1/16/2012 3:32:00 PM

Congrats on your win, Debbie! Love, Kim

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 1/16/2012 11:43:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Susan Burch's "Lottery Ticket Limerick" contest Debbie. Love, Carol

David Williams

Date: 1/16/2012 7:58:00 AM

Debbie, congrats on your win..David

Nette Onclaud

Date: 1/16/2012 5:58:00 AM

tricky and funny.. i remember the da da um dum thing... congrats so fine..:) hugggs

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/15/2012 4:31:00 PM

Congrats on your win, Debs. HOw are you doing these days?

Lizanne Scholtz

Date: 1/15/2012 2:51:00 PM

Congratulations on your win Debbie. elizabeth

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 1/15/2012 12:56:00 PM

congrats Debbie on a sweet success for this lottery Limerick .. nice one luv..

Jslambert Mister Roboto

Date: 1/11/2012 11:50:00 PM

Tricky Dick !

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 1/11/2012 10:00:00 PM

WELL IT HAS BEEN DONE BEFORE DEBBIE.. VERY CREATIVE ENTRY..GOOD LUCK.. AND SUPER THANKXXX FOR MY PLACEMENT IN CONTEST.. WROTE IT FROM MY HEART AND EXPERIENCE .. APPRECIATE THE HONOR..LUV..

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/11/2012 9:20:00 PM

D.G... a fun to read limerick..poor dick..i guess... good luck in the contest..always..p.d.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/11/2012 7:17:00 PM

the only line off is number two. You could just remedy it like this: who would buy lottery quick picks. (it's about the best you can do with the word lottery).Also, I pronounce RA ja with stress on first part. If you can think of a name with stress on SECOND syllable, that meter would be fixed too. (you could say the old corner store)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/11/2012 7:02:00 PM

Cute one, Deb. How far you have come with meter and good things like that since first we met! Thanks for the win. Your contest was OFF THE CHARTS!! I was amazed by the winners.