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When the loud thunder died, clouds open a smile with sunshine. Raindrops danced upon blush of scarlet petals, cleansing the warm earth. Sparrows chirped an explicit scene engaging melody. Petals trace upward akin blazing tongues, a quick kiss it asks Moving blind and incoherent, cold wind spirit dejected Blaze hues of love upon the sunrise, exhausted with passion. 9/22/2021 Your Best Sijo Poetry Contest Sponsored by: William Kekaula

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Date: 10/15/2021 1:50:00 PM
I have read your winner and see its good qualities. Way to go in the contest. Congrats. Sara
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Date: 10/13/2021 11:34:00 PM
Eve, from one harsh intensity in brief, to one that leads pleasantly in length! Bravo my friend! Aloha!
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Date: 10/13/2021 11:19:00 PM
Beautiful nature narration. Congratulations!
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Date: 9/29/2021 1:14:00 PM
Gorgeous imagery "Raindrops danced upon blush of scarlet petals, cleansing the warm earth. " Wow Eve!
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Date: 9/27/2021 9:26:00 PM
Superb imagery! I can feel the atmosphere like I am there.
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Date: 9/27/2021 9:03:00 AM
Beautiful piece here Eve. Wonderful imagery. Sounds to me like a summer rain. God Bless and good luck in the contest. JB
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Date: 9/26/2021 9:57:00 AM
Beautiful imagery, Eve!!
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Date: 9/26/2021 3:30:00 AM
Oh yes,yes, yes a definite win. I love your silky lines producing a gem of colours in nature . Well penned Constance HUGS AND BLESSINGS, JENNIFER.
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Date: 9/25/2021 8:34:00 AM
Lovely, Eve.
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Date: 9/25/2021 4:54:00 AM
Lovely. Amazing imagery.
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Date: 9/23/2021 6:44:00 PM
You truly have a sense of beauty in your poetry dear friend, I enjoyed reading this tonight, God bless xo
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Date: 9/22/2021 11:00:00 PM
Beautiful verse.
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