Tricked In Treating

Like a zombie at a town picnic
Scarfing brains in my room, like a shtick
My costume I offed
For I retched and coughed
Mom said, "That was the ultimate trick!"

October 30th, 2019

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Perrin Avatar
November 14, 2019 at 4:49 AM
Congratulations :-) x
Devonshire Avatar
October 31, 2019 at 11:07 AM
Probably a tummy ache from too much Halloween candy. Enjoyed your limerick, Laura. Congrats on your win!
Krutsinger Avatar
October 31, 2019 at 9:37 AM
A wonderful poem. Welcome to Soup.
Allison Avatar
October 30, 2019 at 8:01 PM
thanks for the smile Laura, a very clever limerick:-) hugs Jan xx
Rodrigues Avatar
October 30, 2019 at 7:33 PM
Congratulations, Laura!
Kitchin Avatar
October 30, 2019 at 7:17 PM
Laura, congratulations on your winning placement with your creative and spooky limerick!
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