Roy Pett Poet Monorhyme

Trick Or Treat Deception

No one dare approach that farm house near the dairy

alone I tentatively knocked the door very wary

door creaked, it opened, trick or treat I said solitary 

I then froze with shock, he looked so evil, savagery

His eyes were bloodshot dark red, colour of blackberry 

I don't scare easily but this was really scary,

His hair was matted, His wrinkled face was very hairy

all my friends had disappeared they had found sanctuary 

the description of this evil man was legendary 

little did my friends know, HE WAS MY UNCLE BARRY..

Composed 10/10/2017
Contest Boo
Sponsored by Alexis Y.

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Eve Roper February 10, 2018 at 2:58 PM Congratulations on your win,Roy, the picture reminds me of some of the homes I love to visit. I always have had a fascination on who would have lived in them ! Hugs Eve ~`* Roy Pett February 12, 2018 at 6:31 AM Thank you for your congratulations Eve much appreciated, I agree properties do have so much history, thanks again for your support. :))

Tom Cunningham February 8, 2018 at 1:51 AM Loved it, that old saying comes to mind, you can choose your friends but not your relatives'. Congratulations. Regards Tom. Roy Pett February 8, 2018 at 4:40 AM Thanks Tom for your congratulations, really pleased you liked this and That saying is so true. :))

Line Gauthier February 5, 2018 at 7:49 PM Awesome lead up to your finale. Congrats on your well deserved win, Roy. Roy Pett February 6, 2018 at 6:08 AM Thank you so much for your congratulations Line, I really appreciate your support and encouragement. :))

Alexis Y. February 5, 2018 at 6:06 PM Hi Roy, This had that "classic" halloween tale vibe to it. I enjoyed it very much. Thanks for participating in my contest. Congratulations on your 1st place win:-) Alexis Roy Pett February 6, 2018 at 6:08 AM Thank you so much for your very kind comment and my placement in your wonderful contest, so pleased you enjoyed and found it interesting. :))

Darren White October 11, 2017 at 5:16 AM Wow, this is great, and all of the in monorhyme :) Roy Pett October 11, 2017 at 6:31 AM Thank you Darren for your very kind comment as I was unsure if I had got this form and theme right, thanks again for your support. :))