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Trick Or Treat

There is fear when the loss perceived greater… my example the ego of youth; not to be measured in quantities but by frailties-- a small hole can sink a ship; so early-on we learn and don armor, make distances… strength often a tactic of the weak; God made us of spirit perfect and immortal… yet, Trick-or-treat we persist in wearing our dead.

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Date: 9/30/2019 9:18:00 AM
A fabulous write! I particularly enjoyed the last verse :-) x
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Joe Dimino
Date: 10/1/2019 8:35:00 AM
Thank you, Elaine; so pleased you enjoyed this work. Have a great day!
Date: 9/10/2019 1:58:00 AM
wise words indeed Joe:-) hugs jan xx
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Joe Dimino
Date: 9/12/2019 11:45:00 AM
Hi Jan; sometimes I get it right:) Thank you, my friend.
Date: 9/8/2019 3:13:00 PM
this is jus brilliant.. you are a very intelligent poet...
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Joe Dimino
Date: 9/8/2019 9:45:00 PM
Thank you, Si; very kind of you. Blessings my friend!!
Date: 9/6/2019 6:42:00 AM
Great final verse!
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Joe Dimino
Date: 9/6/2019 6:50:00 AM
Hi Kim; thank you my friend. Blessings!

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