Trick Of The Night

It’s an optical illusion
Has my brain had a contusion
I look on in rapt confusion
It’s a trick of the night

There’s a shadow in the doorway
Coming my way going your way
It’s as slippery as a moray
It’s a trick of the night

It’s shape is vague; it’s indistinct
I didn’t see from where it slinked
Would it vanish if I blinked
It’s a trick of the night

Dogs don’t pass, they turn and run
Like they’re seeking out the sun 
Even rats avoid the fun
It’s a trick of the night

Dust and dirt rise in the street 
At the tread of unseen feet
Something I care not to meet
It’s a trick of the night

There’s a creaking on my stairs
On my neck are prickling hairs
But she caught me unawares
It’s a trick of the night

There’s a beauty standing there
With a shimmer in her hair
Not a stitch of underwear
It’s a trick of the night

Manly acts I’ve quickly planned
But I do not understand
Is the dagger in her hand
Just a trick of the night

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Date: 9/4/2024 9:44:00 PM
Either way this ends up being a bloody mess - 'Period' or 'no period.' (lol). ~ My Mind's in the Gutter ~ Squirrel, the Nutter
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Date: 8/16/2024 1:07:00 PM
wonderful rhyming, terry! i very much enjoyed this spooky tale...
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Terry Flood
Date: 8/18/2024 2:44:00 PM
Thanks, Ilene. Started this weeks ago, but put it aside as I wasn’t sure where to take it. Let’s hope I can conjure another idea for Halloween. Terry
Date: 8/15/2024 7:20:00 PM
Sounds like Mick Jagger has a female counterpart -- Michaela Dagger
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Date: 8/16/2024 12:09:00 PM
Hmmm… when I mentioned a beautiful woman, I didn’t have Mick Jagger in mind… strange that ;-)
Date: 8/15/2024 6:10:00 PM
Love this! ~ Kim
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Date: 8/16/2024 12:07:00 PM
Thanks, Kim. Glad you enjoyed
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