Tribute To the Back Country Hut

There’s a billy on the open fire
Piles of beech wood by the door
Smokey stains adorn the iron roof
Wax drips on bench and floor.

Old cobwebs drape the windows
Dog-eared cards upon a shelf
The half a dozen Readers Digests
Will fill the evening by yourself.

Outside the rain is pouring down
As you brew your cup of tea
A candle betrays a subtle draft
But you're warm and quite comfy.

Bunks line against  a single wall
You see where mice have chewed
Checking socks upon the mantelpiece
Again enjoying the pleasing mood.

As you sign within the guestbook
A chance to read the travellers tales
Of epic journeys, in stunning land
Huge success and classic fails.

Lives saved by simple shelter
To casual stops along the track
Unplanned stays for many a day
Seen as palace, a villa, and shack.

And to you this place is special
It’s a place you just adore.
And though you’ve never visited,
You know you've been in here before.





*The NZ Department of Conservation manages a network of over 950 huts of all shapes and sizes. They provide unique places to stay, refuge from bad weather, or rest and recover while experiencing the great outdoors.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 7/8/2016 11:41:00 PM
Beautiful poem, Mark - a joy to read and I'm happy that I grew an inkling of what you spoke before I saw the footnote. I think there may be one 'your' where you mean 'you're', but I'm way tired and could be wrong. I can always be wrong, but not about your poem being good ... CayCay (OK, last line, 3rd stanza)
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CayCay Jennings
Date: 7/9/2016 9:11:00 AM
I tossed and turned all the night, worried that in my tired state I had caused you unnecessary 'grief.' Funny, what gnaws at us, isn't it? Now that I'm bright eyed, I really got a grin reading your response to me, too cute! I once got chewed out at work (long ago) for typing 'your' instead of 'you're' - again, funny what sticks. All the best ... CayCay
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Date: 7/9/2016 12:02:00 AM
Actually your are 100 percent correct. My proof reading was well off this time! Thank you very muchly! : )
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