Tribute To My Paternal Grandmother

Old and bent when she sat in her gooseneck rocker Waiting for the angelic shout to call her home Grandma was best described as very prim and proper. When we learned she was gone it was a shocker I recall her braiding her hair with a fine-tooth comb Old and bent when she sat in her gooseneck rocker. In her later years, Grandma wasn’t much of a talker When she spoke, her words dripped like a honeycomb Grandma was best described as very prim and proper. When she occasionally moved about with her walker She glided through the room like a little old gnome Old and bent when she sat in her gooseneck rocker. She would peer out a window but wasn’t a gawker When visitors left, she would smile and say “Shalom,” Grandma was best described as very prim and proper. As she grew older, she shrunk up, becoming smaller, Looking back, I now remember her in monochrome Old and bent when she sat in her gooseneck rocker, Grandma was best described as very prim and proper.
Written November 4, 2022
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Krutsinger Avatar
November 7, 2022 at 2:16 PM
This is nice to hear "When visitors left, she would smile and say “Shalom,”"
Messina Avatar
November 6, 2022 at 4:10 AM
A wonderful villanelle, Milt. Grandma...would be proud! I visualized her without even knowing what she looked like, somewhat to my grandmother :) Never wrote this form, perhaps it's time to give it a go. Charlie
Hankins Avatar
November 6, 2022 at 8:29 AM
Thanks, Charlie. I've been a fan of the villanelle for a long time. You should give it a go. They are fun to write.
Kaufman Avatar
November 5, 2022 at 2:32 AM
I'm sure this form of poetry has to be challenging to write Milton. I also felt that the repeating of lines made it quite powerful and I could visualize your aging grand mom hobbling about
Hankins Avatar
November 5, 2022 at 8:04 AM
Thank you, Nancy. I love working with these types of poetry forms.
Cunningham Avatar
November 4, 2022 at 9:24 AM
A beautiful tribute Milton, a shame that we have to grow old. Tom
Hankins Avatar
November 4, 2022 at 10:50 AM
Indeed, Tom. I think someone got it backwards. We could have been born old and gone the other direction.
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