Tribute To My Father

You taught me how a mortal should live
And this I value more than what Kings give,
Your meek gait from the church into the grave
Such long-lasting wisdom and inspiration gave.

You read the Scripture under the noontime shade
And this taught me lasting lessons that will never fade,
That hope is dead that comes not from the Savior above
And that the rest men seek in vain until they seek his love.

Had you left behind colossal measures of gold 
Such that all before me unrequested bowed,
Vain I would grow and think everyone stunk
And treat my fellow men like unwanted junk.

But kind heavens loved your darling kid
And something greater upon him did,
The rare gift of faith the Almighty gave
And poured the water and blood that save.

When he surveys his surroundings and sees
The twinkle of the stars and the dancing of the trees,
He thinks of the eternal wealth of hope past death
And mocks the cares that come with fleeting breath.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 11/29/2015 2:23:00 AM
I love the way you wrote this little rhyme . 7 for sure, Thank you for coming to read mt Sin City :)
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Date: 8/11/2015 10:55:00 AM
You take my breath away. I enjoy your poetry!! 7+
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Date: 7/24/2015 7:09:00 AM
This is really great. It immortalizes your love for him.Hugs Kilalo
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Date: 7/2/2015 12:41:00 PM
"The rare gift of FAITH the Almighty gave........What a read an tribute to your father. A 7+ from me. Much Love
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Date: 6/14/2015 4:09:00 PM
This is a beautiful poem for your father, Thank you for your kind comments on my poem ill sing to my king, Jesus is the one and only King above all kings, He has opened doors for me, and to go on you tube and sing has blown me away, if never of dreamed of it but here I am singing to Jesus to the whole world all them that have you tube.
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Date: 6/14/2015 1:11:00 PM
My friend, I love this wonderful, moving tribute to your dear father! Excellent write, my friend, that I enjoyed reading! Pandita
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Date: 6/14/2015 12:06:00 PM
A beautiful tribute, Hannington, and words to bring joy to both your earthly father and Heavenly Father (as well as to your readers). Thanks for sharing...hugs, Rhonda
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Date: 6/13/2015 9:17:00 PM
"The rare gift of faith the Almighty gave" What a beautiful tribute to your loving father, Hannington. He raised an awesome son a gift to pass on to the futur. a 7 hugs dear friend Eve
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