Tribute To Jimi Hendrix

He came from a distant galaxy
On his way to planet Earth,
he stopped over to visit Mars
but didn’t like the atmosphere
No clubs, outdoor concerts or studios
and just a few microscopic life forms,
thus the audiences were rather sparse
They were rather small-minded as well
and did NOT appreciate his music…

He couldn’t stay here very long either
The Polaris Council advised him to leave
(Many other galaxies to visit ya know)
However, I MAY have some good news
There’s an outside chance he may return
When he thinks we are ready…
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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A. Sharma Avatar
July 27, 2015 at 1:47 AM
Sorry I was so engrossed in reading tribute to Jimi, that i typed his name in place of yours Tim!Extremely sorry!
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July 27, 2015 at 1:45 AM
Congrats on ur wonderful winning write Jimi ! Brilliant work!
Wigley Avatar
July 27, 2015 at 12:23 AM
Nice to think as he stood looking at the empty launchpad as the last rocket left, he thought 'there must be some kind of way out of here'....... fun write, Tim, well done. Regards, Viv
A  Avatar
July 26, 2015 at 5:13 PM
TIM Congratulations on your MARS win :) **SKAT**
Allison Avatar
July 26, 2015 at 12:52 PM
great fun write Tim - many congrats:-) hugs Jan xx
Eastman Avatar
June 29, 2015 at 12:33 PM
You go Tim! I'm your competetion in the contest... May we both come out with fun!... Just saying...
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