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Tribute to Jimi Hendrix

He came from a distant galaxy
On his way to planet Earth,
he stopped over to visit Mars
but didn’t like the atmosphere
No clubs, outdoor concerts or studios
and just a few microscopic life forms,
thus the audiences were rather sparse
They were rather small-minded as well
and did NOT appreciate his music…

He couldn’t stay here very long either
The Polaris Council advised him to leave
(Many other galaxies to visit ya know)
However, I MAY have some good news
There’s an outside chance he may return
When he thinks we are ready…


Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Date: 8/1/2015 11:04:00 PM
Tim.. Loved your creative Mars write and I congratulate you on terrific tribute to Jimi Hendrix and this sweet win!
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Date: 7/27/2015 1:47:00 AM
Sorry I was so engrossed in reading tribute to Jimi, that i typed his name in place of yours Tim!Extremely sorry!
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Date: 7/27/2015 1:45:00 AM
Congrats on ur wonderful winning write Jimi ! Brilliant work!
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Date: 7/27/2015 12:23:00 AM
Nice to think as he stood looking at the empty launchpad as the last rocket left, he thought 'there must be some kind of way out of here'....... fun write, Tim, well done. Regards, Viv
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Date: 7/26/2015 5:13:00 PM
TIM Congratulations on your MARS win :) **SKAT**
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Date: 7/26/2015 12:52:00 PM
great fun write Tim - many congrats:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 6/29/2015 12:33:00 PM
You go Tim! I'm your competetion in the contest... May we both come out with fun!... Just saying...
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