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Here on poetrysoup, the newest poem, pops up on-screen like the latest off-shoot, or newborn babe or like a newest floral bud, in the orchards of poetry. Or like a fresh wave of words crashing and cresting upon the turf For all and sundry to view, enjoy and surf! Or ha ha, even like linguistic kernels that pop like popcorn in the crockery of poetrysoup with different flavors to choose from, to reveal what's been cooking in the minds. Some indeed spiced-up, some spicy some acidic or buttery all of 'em', more or less with melody. Or the newest poetry is to put it more exquisitely, is a fragrant flower just bloomed in the bedecked bowers of poetry Or to say, each latest poem pops on screen Like pop goes the weasel For poems pop up like meerkats but on the lookout for friends instead of foes. Ah, and then they might wait for the honey and jam of comments and perhaps even the bitter gourd of criticism, for healthy constructive criticism is like any bitter pill vital to health. You're lucky if the doctors of poetry refrain from prescribing chits of bitter pills to swallow, Or opted for sugar-coated ones for which you heave a sigh of relief you didn't receive, blunt sharp critique! As I prefer sugar coated pills in all matters. Yet if they do administer the wrong dose out of sheer bias and prejudice, you can always give them a taste of their own medicine, if you wish to be vengeful and impudent Or you can forgo, overlook and be lenient For my poetry is meant to be tasteful and gentleness is nice. Harshly insensitive reviews can leave a sour after taste in the mouth. As I'm habituated to taking sugar coated pills. A biased person could never appreciate my poetry. Let's taste and try out all the varied variety of curries and broths of muse out here... Let's all appreciate the different flavours that simmer in the poetry soup melting pot, many cooking up delectable foods for thought...

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Date: 6/2/2023 9:15:00 PM
A thought to the mix, an abcence of clique's Also cliche's would do.,' yet left out of the Stew ' enjoyed time spent here '
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Date: 3/16/2023 3:01:00 PM
Hello S.Z aynab Kamoonpuri, A lovely tribute to Poetry Soup. enjoy your evening my friend. Hugs.
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Date: 7/22/2022 6:34:00 AM
All the flavors in the melting pot...all the different curries...just fine work Zaynab! Many thanks for the share. Linda
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Date: 6/27/2022 2:08:00 PM
I agree my friend. I'm going to add you to the poets I follow, hope you'll do the same. A poet friend inTexas, Bill
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Date: 6/26/2022 2:57:00 AM
Every human being on planet Earth is unique, each mind does not think alike and each ones talents can maybe be grouped together like poets, musicians, artists, singers etc, but each is an individual so not one creation of anyones will ever be the same - Vive la difference, as Frenchmen say Vive la France. Different strokes for different folks. Have saved this poem - fabulous work. Hugs, blessings Zaynab, Jennifer.
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Date: 3/1/2022 10:16:00 AM
Hello S.Zaynab, I just read this poem. I do not care of the color of your skin. What I see is a person in front of me. I am friendly person, My comments are not harsh. My comments are normal. I sign off with Have a nice day my friend. Then a Hug. My name. Darlene
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Date: 12/4/2021 5:38:00 AM
I really enjoyed this. It is the deepest look at poetry I have ever seen. I want to thank you for allowing me to read it.
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Date: 11/14/2021 6:43:00 AM
what lovely thoughts here
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Date: 11/3/2021 8:04:00 PM
Hello Zaynab ... some very purposeful points and great lines indeed. All I need to say is; it was a pleasure to read your verse Zaynab - Lindsay
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Date: 11/3/2021 3:33:00 PM
Zaynab, I embrace your words, flavors, thoughts and emotions in this passionate and delicious write. I am excited about the popping and blossoming of new poems and new words to express the depths of the mind and soul. Love this poem you have unveiled for us ! All my best, Susan :)
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Date: 11/3/2021 2:25:00 PM
I love the imagery in this piece, such a fun read; I feel the energy within the lines. Beautifully penned.
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Date: 11/1/2021 10:50:00 AM
This is so beautifully crafted Zaynab...yes, every new bloom here on Soup has its own unique fragrance...loved your metaphors...Hugs...~Ani
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Date: 10/30/2021 10:11:00 AM
"Like pop goes the weasel For poems pop up like meerkats" Always liked those animals. I do like the interactions on PS, even the negative ones. Part of being real is being honest, and I would rather someone be honest with me than to be fake. So I welcome all friends and foes.
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Date: 10/30/2021 8:52:00 AM
Amen!!!
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Date: 10/29/2021 6:33:00 AM
Hey Mr. K. This is a nice write. Love the critique at the end, I like all criticism, tells me that whatever I wrote is worth a comment, good or bad. If bad then I need to up my skills. Blessings. D.
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S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri
Date: 10/30/2021 2:36:00 AM
Hi poet, thanks soo much for the review, yeah constructive criticism is good. Im a poetess as in 'a lady' not mr . by the way. Have a good day,
Date: 10/27/2021 8:48:00 AM
Love this piece you have written and yes we all need appreciate the different flavors brought to this site. Each one creates like patterned farmland we build and grow and create wonderful poetry. Nicely written. love phyl
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S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri
Date: 10/28/2021 8:09:00 AM
Yes like your wonderful poetry too, different poets bring variety to the soup. Warmest thanks for that eloquent comment!
Date: 10/26/2021 3:18:00 AM
The only thing I want to comment and say for now is that I found potential in your poetry, congrats salute alkas Ps Harsh, never... We do not the right to be much hard.,
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S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri
Date: 10/28/2021 8:08:00 AM
Aw im super thrilled that you think so fine poet! Yeah im glad i never get harsh criticism. Thanks much, Cheers!
Date: 10/25/2021 1:57:00 AM
Creatively woven! I enjoyed reading your poem. You're a gifted writer Zaynab.
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S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri
Date: 10/25/2021 9:09:00 AM
Thanks soo much for great nice comment. You are such a fine poet too.!
Date: 10/23/2021 9:59:00 AM
It's fun to see people's opinions on Soup and comments, etc. Most members here have written at least a few poems devoted to Soup itself. I did it back in my "honeymoon phase" after 2009! I liked your metaphors you used!! You should notice that hardly anyone here ever gives negative critiques, so we have that going for us!!
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S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri
Date: 10/23/2021 1:28:00 PM
Yeah on many poetic sites most poets thankfully never give harsh or biased reviews. Warmest thanks for the fine comment,
Date: 10/23/2021 7:25:00 AM
A variety of poetic blooms, Very nicely penned
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S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri
Date: 10/23/2021 1:23:00 PM
Thanks soo much for fab comment!
Date: 10/22/2021 12:50:00 PM
You cover quite a lot in this write on the congratulations foibles Punishment and platitudes inherent in this poetic life S.zanab.
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S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri
Date: 10/22/2021 8:48:00 PM
Wow thanks for that very eloquent comment, i had to look up some words and i hope i got you right in understanding your comment to be a positive one.
Date: 10/22/2021 11:26:00 AM
Hello S.Zaynab, I agree with you. I for no we do not give out harsh comments. I never have. This is good advice for everyone to know. We all must be good to everyone on the Soup. Enjoy your poetry. Blessings my friend. enjoy your day. Darlene
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 10/24/2021 11:18:00 AM
Hello S. Zaynab, your welcome. I do not do harsh remarks. I am kind always. Enjoy your day my friend.
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S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri
Date: 10/22/2021 8:46:00 PM
Yeah most poets everywhere i am as well thankfully don't write harsh reviews, i do get the rare biased response . Yes we should be kind to different opinions and all poets. Warm thanks for a great nice review. Enjoy yours too!
Date: 10/22/2021 11:19:00 AM
A wonderful/creative write. "Love It" What a "Great" ending. Your pen was working overtime on this one. Have a blessed autumn day writing away...................
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S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri
Date: 10/22/2021 8:43:00 PM
Um overtime as in long poem you mean? This is actually one of my shorter poems as others go overboard and in overdrive usually lol. But my poems are still much shorter than famous epic poems like 'paradise lost by some westerner and something 'odyssey..,'. Warm thanks for the fine comment, have a blessed autumn you too.
Date: 10/22/2021 11:02:00 AM
Your eloquent articulations illuminate the individualistic qualities bestowed amidst the united efforts put forward by fellow soupers here at PS. A wondrous exposé you've composed here my friend! Walk with Grace, Aloha!
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S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri
Date: 10/22/2021 8:41:00 PM
Hii, thanks soo much for the nice comment and stating how my poem appreciates all poets yes! Grace and peace,
Date: 10/22/2021 9:54:00 AM
A delightful write, S.zaynab! Very insightful with lots of sage advice. Enjoyed! Bob H
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S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri
Date: 10/22/2021 9:58:00 AM
Thanks soo much for great comment, glad you liked its gentle suggestions. Best wishes,
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