Tribute To a Lady

Sometimes at evening when the sun goes down
I light a little candle all ready for love
I am older than Luther, soul of soul unbound
I bridge desire with Bee Gees, and move
To your ears to whisper in hibiscus tones
Anticipating your wet and sweet delicious moans.

But you have the day still wired to your soul
Blisters and bruises from Monday’s blues
You sigh misshaped by the world’s callous mould
You need tenderness without the old cues
Silent massage of toes, and a listening ear
To the litany of woes wrinkling your heart with care.

I say softly to our son, your mother, child, is weary
She is human too … not just here to serve
Our needs … milk of our existence bright or dreary
Prattling visions of corrections on the nerve
Help me to do, what she alone so oft has done
Bring her to a state crowned in golden glows of sun.

O mother, woman, queen, eternal wife, behold
My soul is laid down as carpet for your feet
My heart the citadel replenishing love and gold
Defending your virtue from rough rain and sleet
I come with thoughts of kindness and the thrift
Of all my soul’s domain as your treasure and gift.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Bickerstaffe Avatar
April 9, 2009 at 7:31 AM
As if a mother who is tied to the home - cleaning, cooking, tidying - doesn't have the hardest job of all... the nurturer deserves full praise, affection and reverence... God bless, Keith
Curcio Avatar
April 8, 2009 at 5:21 PM
A truly beautiful tribute to your wife - Bravo
Smith-Johnsen Avatar
April 8, 2009 at 9:22 AM
I must say that I blushed as I read the first stanza. This is really beautiful. It is nice to see that there are people who think of others more than of themselves. I enjoyed this write. It paints a clear picture of love. I would like to thank you for your comments on my poem as well.
Guzzi Avatar
April 7, 2009 at 7:29 PM
What a great tribute to woman, lady love and lover. Most excellent poet. Light & Love
Skinner Avatar
April 7, 2009 at 6:27 PM
This read like a devotion to the "one " you care for.If only people would see it is so much better to care.To be there at the end of a hard day,little things that add up to the whole.....Jim
Reynolds Avatar
April 7, 2009 at 6:20 PM
Goodness me O' my, what a man you are - and what a lucky woman to have you! L'nass, I have missed reading your beauty. the second verse...perfection. wow. love, Kristin
Chircop Avatar
April 7, 2009 at 1:09 PM
what a tribute my friend,your words so strong ,your message so deep,excellent write-charma
Winter Avatar
April 7, 2009 at 12:33 PM
Oh my heart be still. Your words alone would vanquish any dreariness or harshness of the day's reality. Your love is giving, tender and true. A poem alone would lift me to the heavens, yet I sense you do so much more. As she must be so deserving too of such a beautiful tribute. Sigh. You bring joy and smiles to the reader. too. Swept away. Love, Shar
Joseph Avatar
April 7, 2009 at 11:59 AM
just lovely.
Atanacio Avatar
April 7, 2009 at 11:57 AM
breath-taking done and written right
Richards Avatar
April 7, 2009 at 10:18 AM
Oh my....this is a glorius declaration of true, deep and abiding love. This poem goes beyond the usual love story, a real understanding of what love should be. Breath-taking. Loved this....Carrie
Jordan Avatar
April 7, 2009 at 9:04 AM
L'nass this is also a wonderfully beautiful poem that speaks so tenderly of love and the respect you have for it - Love your poetry bro - God Bless, MJ
Goff Avatar
April 7, 2009 at 7:54 AM
goodness, L'nass, I'm speechless, what beauty, Jim
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