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Tribute To a Lady

Sometimes at evening when the sun goes down I light a little candle all ready for love I am older than Luther, soul of soul unbound I bridge desire with Bee Gees, and move To your ears to whisper in hibiscus tones Anticipating your wet and sweet delicious moans. But you have the day still wired to your soul Blisters and bruises from Monday’s blues You sigh misshaped by the world’s callous mould You need tenderness without the old cues Silent massage of toes, and a listening ear To the litany of woes wrinkling your heart with care. I say softly to our son, your mother, child, is weary She is human too … not just here to serve Our needs … milk of our existence bright or dreary Prattling visions of corrections on the nerve Help me to do, what she alone so oft has done Bring her to a state crowned in golden glows of sun. O mother, woman, queen, eternal wife, behold My soul is laid down as carpet for your feet My heart the citadel replenishing love and gold Defending your virtue from rough rain and sleet I come with thoughts of kindness and the thrift Of all my soul’s domain as your treasure and gift.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 4/9/2009 7:31:00 AM
As if a mother who is tied to the home - cleaning, cooking, tidying - doesn't have the hardest job of all... the nurturer deserves full praise, affection and reverence... God bless, Keith
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Date: 4/8/2009 5:21:00 PM
A truly beautiful tribute to your wife - Bravo
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Date: 4/8/2009 9:22:00 AM
I must say that I blushed as I read the first stanza. This is really beautiful. It is nice to see that there are people who think of others more than of themselves. I enjoyed this write. It paints a clear picture of love. I would like to thank you for your comments on my poem as well.
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Date: 4/7/2009 7:29:00 PM
What a great tribute to woman, lady love and lover. Most excellent poet. Light & Love
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Date: 4/7/2009 6:27:00 PM
This read like a devotion to the "one " you care for.If only people would see it is so much better to care.To be there at the end of a hard day,little things that add up to the whole.....Jim
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Date: 4/7/2009 6:20:00 PM
Goodness me O' my, what a man you are - and what a lucky woman to have you! L'nass, I have missed reading your beauty. the second verse...perfection. wow. love, Kristin
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Date: 4/7/2009 1:09:00 PM
what a tribute my friend,your words so strong ,your message so deep,excellent write-charma
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Date: 4/7/2009 12:33:00 PM
Oh my heart be still. Your words alone would vanquish any dreariness or harshness of the day's reality. Your love is giving, tender and true. A poem alone would lift me to the heavens, yet I sense you do so much more. As she must be so deserving too of such a beautiful tribute. Sigh. You bring joy and smiles to the reader. too. Swept away. Love, Shar
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Date: 4/7/2009 11:59:00 AM
just lovely.
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Date: 4/7/2009 11:57:00 AM
breath-taking done and written right
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Date: 4/7/2009 10:18:00 AM
Oh my....this is a glorius declaration of true, deep and abiding love. This poem goes beyond the usual love story, a real understanding of what love should be. Breath-taking. Loved this....Carrie
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Date: 4/7/2009 9:04:00 AM
L'nass this is also a wonderfully beautiful poem that speaks so tenderly of love and the respect you have for it - Love your poetry bro - God Bless, MJ
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Date: 4/7/2009 7:54:00 AM
goodness, L'nass, I'm speechless, what beauty, Jim
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