Notes About The Poem

2nd in Tricube Challenge (Sponsor: Oliver McKeithan)

Judged: July 29th, 2025

Triangles

I've noticed
Yesterdays
In your eyes

Memories
Crowded house
Three's too much

You're still high
You're so full
Of her love
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Mckeithan Avatar
July 29, 2025 at 12:33 PM
Congrats on your placement in my contest Trina. Tough situation. Three is a crowd
Layne Avatar
July 29, 2025 at 1:05 PM
Thank you, Oliver. Three is a crowd, indeed.
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