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Trial Run

Trial run



He said
I said
We tried
He couldn’t
I didn’t
Goodbye

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Nigel Fawcett

November 13, 2008 at 12:14 AM

I got a nice smile out of this Barbara, but I suspect there is a deeper story behind this abbreviated account. Love, Nigel

Daver Austin

November 12, 2008 at 11:07 AM

Musta been a blind date, eh? If given enough time there are, no doubt, several interpretations possible, which, after all, makes a good poem. Good poem, Barb. Love, daver

Carrie Richards

November 12, 2008 at 6:58 AM

That say is all! No need to ramble on, guess we know what happened! Cute poem!! ~Carrie

Christopher Higgins

November 12, 2008 at 5:43 AM

You got to the point very quickly. You tried and that all that matter. The poem is wonderful, direct and strong.

Michael Torres

November 12, 2008 at 2:11 AM

This is fabulous a relationship which is microwaved into word's. I love this one Barbara. Poor guy though, but maybe he had it coming lol. Excellent write. Why aren't poet's commenting on your great works? They are missing out on talent. Michael Torres

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