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Triad In 7 Beats

Fragile fleeting dew drop spheres Pearl the web as day appears: Silken string of fairy tears. 2/21/2017 For contest Triad in 7 beats Sponsored by nette onclaud

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Line Gauthier

Date: 7/24/2018 10:25:00 PM

Lovely, Agnes. Congrats.

Mark Martin

Date: 3/12/2017 4:09:00 PM

Love the use of pearl as a verb. Congratulations Agnes on your win! :-)

Agnes Krampe
Date: 3/12/2017 8:53:00 PM

Thank you, Mark.

Charlotte Puddifoot

Date: 2/28/2017 7:15:00 AM

this is one of the best i've read, great rhythm and flow and alliteration - congrats on your win!

Agnes Krampe
Date: 3/12/2017 8:53:00 PM

Thank you, Charlotte.

Reason A. Poteet

Date: 2/27/2017 9:26:00 AM

Creative, Agnes, new form which I will check out. You did well and the win proves it...the fairy tears is a special, unique description.

Agnes Krampe
Date: 3/12/2017 8:52:00 PM

Thank you, Reason.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/26/2017 6:51:00 PM

this is really good imagery, quite unique and very much liked by me!!! Congrats, Agnes.

Agnes Krampe
Date: 3/12/2017 8:52:00 PM

Thank you, Andrea.

Grant Norwood

Date: 2/26/2017 4:31:00 PM

Really nice. Well done

Agnes Krampe
Date: 2/26/2017 4:58:00 PM

Thanks, Grant.

Jan Allison

Date: 2/26/2017 4:11:00 PM

Yours was my personal favourite Agnes I LOVED that final line:-) hugs Jan xx

Agnes Krampe
Date: 2/26/2017 4:58:00 PM

Thanks, Jan.

Laura Leiser

Date: 2/26/2017 3:23:00 PM

Congrats on your win, too, Agnes :)

Agnes Krampe
Date: 2/26/2017 4:58:00 PM

Thanks, Laura.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 2/26/2017 11:33:00 AM

'fairy tears'.. what an imaginative verse all the way, agnes... sweet congrats on your award and thanks for joining!..huggs

Agnes Krampe
Date: 2/26/2017 2:34:00 PM

Thank you very much, nette - I am so glad you liked my poem.

Winged Warrior

Date: 2/22/2017 8:58:00 PM

Superbly done Agnes...I'll give you 1'st place right now lol...god bless...^WW^

Agnes Krampe
Date: 2/23/2017 7:30:00 AM

Thank you, ^WW^

Probir Gupta

Date: 2/22/2017 8:35:00 AM

Lovely indeed ...

Agnes Krampe
Date: 2/23/2017 7:29:00 AM

Thanks, Probir.

Joanna Daniel

Date: 2/22/2017 7:02:00 AM

"Fairy tears" - amazing thought, Agnes:)

Agnes Krampe
Date: 2/23/2017 7:29:00 AM

Thanks, Jo. You know how images sometimes just pop into your head out of nowhere...

CayCay Jennings

Date: 2/22/2017 5:02:00 AM

Someone else had a fairy - it is the only 2nd anything in all the diverse entries I've read. It is of no matter, for it is your unique fairy, particular to your unique and creative write. I enjoyed ... CayCay

Agnes Krampe
Date: 2/22/2017 6:45:00 AM

Yes, I saw that one (after I had submitted mine) But then, some words just come to mind with the image, so I am not surprised..

Laura Leiser

Date: 2/21/2017 9:21:00 PM

I really didn't see this before I wrote mine! We have many of the same words in our triads, Agnes! Great poem :)

Agnes Krampe
Date: 2/22/2017 6:46:00 AM

Yours is the only other one I've seen that had a fairy, too :) But we are all working off the same image, so it's natural that we come up with similar words. It is fun to see how everybody's poem ends up differently nevertheless.