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Triad In 7 Beats

Fragile fleeting dew drop spheres
Pearl the web as day appears:
Silken string of fairy tears.

2/21/2017
For contest Triad in 7 beats
Sponsored by nette onclaud

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Line Gauthier

July 24, 2018 at 10:25 PM

Lovely, Agnes. Congrats.

Mark Martin

March 12, 2017 at 4:09 PM

Love the use of pearl as a verb. Congratulations Agnes on your win! :-)

Agnes Krampe

March 12, 2017 at 8:53 PM

Thank you, Mark.

Charlotte Puddifoot

February 28, 2017 at 7:15 AM

this is one of the best i've read, great rhythm and flow and alliteration - congrats on your win!

Agnes Krampe

March 12, 2017 at 8:53 PM

Thank you, Charlotte.

Reason A. Poteet

February 27, 2017 at 9:26 AM

Creative, Agnes, new form which I will check out. You did well and the win proves it...the fairy tears is a special, unique description.

Agnes Krampe

March 12, 2017 at 8:52 PM

Thank you, Reason.

Andrea Dietrich

February 26, 2017 at 6:51 PM

this is really good imagery, quite unique and very much liked by me!!! Congrats, Agnes.

Agnes Krampe

March 12, 2017 at 8:52 PM

Thank you, Andrea.

Grant Norwood

February 26, 2017 at 4:31 PM

Really nice. Well done

Agnes Krampe

February 26, 2017 at 4:58 PM

Thanks, Grant.

Jan Allison

February 26, 2017 at 4:11 PM

Yours was my personal favourite Agnes I LOVED that final line:-) hugs Jan xx

Agnes Krampe

February 26, 2017 at 4:58 PM

Thanks, Jan.

Laura Leiser

February 26, 2017 at 3:23 PM

Congrats on your win, too, Agnes :)

Agnes Krampe

February 26, 2017 at 4:58 PM

Thanks, Laura.

Nette Onclaud

February 26, 2017 at 11:33 AM

'fairy tears'.. what an imaginative verse all the way, agnes... sweet congrats on your award and thanks for joining!..huggs

Agnes Krampe

February 26, 2017 at 2:34 PM

Thank you very much, nette - I am so glad you liked my poem.

Winged Warrior

February 22, 2017 at 8:58 PM

Superbly done Agnes...I'll give you 1'st place right now lol...god bless...^WW^

Agnes Krampe

February 23, 2017 at 7:30 AM

Thank you, ^WW^

Probir Gupta

February 22, 2017 at 8:35 AM

Lovely indeed ...

Agnes Krampe

February 23, 2017 at 7:29 AM

Thanks, Probir.

Joanna Daniel

February 22, 2017 at 7:02 AM

"Fairy tears" - amazing thought, Agnes:)

Agnes Krampe

February 23, 2017 at 7:29 AM

Thanks, Jo. You know how images sometimes just pop into your head out of nowhere...

CayCay Godwin

February 22, 2017 at 5:02 AM

Someone else had a fairy - it is the only 2nd anything in all the diverse entries I've read. It is of no matter, for it is your unique fairy, particular to your unique and creative write. I enjoyed ... CayCay

Agnes Krampe

February 22, 2017 at 6:45 AM

Yes, I saw that one (after I had submitted mine) But then, some words just come to mind with the image, so I am not surprised..

Laura Leiser

February 21, 2017 at 9:21 PM

I really didn't see this before I wrote mine! We have many of the same words in our triads, Agnes! Great poem :)

Agnes Krampe

February 22, 2017 at 6:46 AM

Yours is the only other one I've seen that had a fairy, too :) But we are all working off the same image, so it's natural that we come up with similar words. It is fun to see how everybody's poem ends up differently nevertheless.