Tri-Ku

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Just having some fun on a grey Saturday AM. Reflecting on a life of hard work and family.

Tri-Ku / Senryu Frayed pants aging tassels in the wind work in progress Patched dreams soft comfort of renewal love’s chevrons Old boots moldings of the soul carry on John G. Lawless 7/29/2017

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Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 7/29/2017 12:32:00 PM

These are great John! : )

Russell Sivey

Date: 7/29/2017 8:38:00 AM

This Senryu is so cool, I really enjoyed reading it this morning! What a brilliant piece, Great Work!!

John Lawless
Date: 7/29/2017 9:01:00 AM

Thanks Russell, glad you enjoyed it. I was just sorta sitting here viewing life in a metaphoric mindset.