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Tri-Desire

    "Tri-Desire"



love triangle creates false trinity for Future dream
ultimate denial destroys yet love reigns claiming victory
masquerade generates triple deceit in name of love.


*For Debbie Guzzi's Trinity Contest.

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Skat A

Date: 3/13/2014 3:04:00 AM

lovely ~Love you forever my bff....... RIP Sweet Linda-Marie ~SKAT~

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 11/10/2012 6:06:00 PM

Linda,,, my sweet bff... nice to read your winning poem once again...pd

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/8/2012 11:46:00 PM

Hi, Linda. it's nice to see you here on the list tonight. BIG congrats my friend. How goes it for you today??

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 11/8/2012 3:46:00 PM

Hey Sweetie you in NJ or Italy? Congrad's on Your Win! Light & Love

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 11/8/2012 3:13:00 PM

Congratulations on your winning poems in the "Trinity" contest - well done Linda-Mare - Huggs / / Anne-Lise :)

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 11/8/2012 8:50:00 AM

Congratulations on your fine win xx

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 11/8/2012 8:34:00 AM

Congratulations on your win Linda-Marie. Love, Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 11/8/2012 8:17:00 AM

WON 10TH PLACE .. THANKXX

Bl Devnath

Date: 10/25/2012 3:51:00 AM

Fantastic Tri-desire. Good luck my friend. Loved always, bl

Rachel St.Cross

Date: 10/23/2012 6:29:00 PM

* SoupMail, Sweet Beautiful LindaMarie. My Love, Rachel *

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/23/2012 4:25:00 PM

Interesting work..Reads like a winner to me..Enjoyed reading this eve...Good luck in the contest..Thanks for the encouraging reviews of my work..Sara

Rachel St.Cross

Date: 10/23/2012 4:02:00 PM

* Love Is Love. To Fight For. To Live For. To Die For. 'The Trinity.' Sweet Kisses, My Love, Rachel *

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 10/23/2012 3:45:00 PM

So true my dear Jersey Girl. You write from your beautiful mind and wonderful soul. A gift. Love to you always Michael. Ps. GIANTS BABY!!

Harry Horsman

Date: 10/23/2012 3:06:00 PM

wonderful poem, and good advice......love this...

Joann Grisetti

Date: 10/23/2012 2:55:00 PM

another in a long line of good poems from you, Linda. never ending imagination expressed in the perfect words.

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 10/23/2012 2:21:00 PM

Thanks Linda!! Keep on keeping on..Light & Love

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 10/23/2012 12:18:00 PM

Wonderful reading your Magnificent poetry today Linda-Marie. Wishing you the best in Deb's contest. Love, Carol

Russell Sivey

Date: 10/23/2012 10:25:00 AM

Wow, what a powerful poem for Debbie's new contest! I hadn't noticed her new contest yet, I'll have to check on it...but this poem is yet another masterfully written write by you my friend! You will surely place high with this awesome piece! What an intriguing write, a noticeably amazing poem Linda-Marie! I love this piece, Great Work!!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/23/2012 7:19:00 AM

Way to do a trinity of desire, Linda. hmmmm, this is a contest I sure need to check out. I was seeing lots of sijo suddenly. Will have to review the rules of sijo again!!