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Trepidation

Conical pillars,
Hanging...trembling...from the cave:
Sweating out of fear.

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James Fraser

October 10, 2009 at 10:19 AM

Your formation in your writing Raul equals natures formations, you both do us proud >> James

Robin L. Gass

October 10, 2009 at 9:57 AM

Wonderful visuals in this Haiku, Raul! Ominus vision! Love, Robin

Charmaine Chircop

October 10, 2009 at 3:00 AM

This is scary.. agitating trembling with fear,i feel fear.. Concical pillars narrow at the base,no strength there either...excellent job -Charma

Brian Strand

October 10, 2009 at 12:40 AM

You capture this so well Raul.Thank you for your welcome comments Rgds Brian

Jared Pickett

October 9, 2009 at 10:41 PM

Sweet Haiku there Raul..... Boy the Haiku is widely used here among the poets of PoetrySoup.......:JP]

Carolyn Devonshire

October 9, 2009 at 9:39 PM

Those formations in caves do appear to be sweating, don't they? Clever observation in this great haiku, Raul! Love, Carolyn

Cecil Hickman

October 9, 2009 at 9:19 PM

definitely deeply moving to which the reader is grabbed and held into the lines,,very very powerful,,as has been said,,and Thank you for reading and leaving your words behind,,blessings..Cecil