Trembles and Thrills

Two of us, in woods
With emotions in their nudes
The greenest pastures
And all of them on our side
A paradise bona fide

Song in air, I hear
sweet fragrance that I revere
Spring in my feet and 
An Idea in my mind 
As she is around and near

None to listen and
Perfume making me hasten
Pace in my step and
An impish tinge in the scheme
I hold her tight and fasten

Rhythm of the breaths
The tune of falling dew drops
Blue moon as witness
With the dreamy clouds beneath
Smiles on top, love underneath

Did I see a Dream?
Was it all I imagined?
It does not matter
I can still feel the moonlight
Bathed in the love and delight

Dec 10, 2015.

For the Contest 'Trembles and Thrills'
By Olive Eloisa Guillermo

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 12/23/2015 6:29:00 AM
Congrats!
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Date: 12/23/2015 11:40:00 PM
Thanks for visiting this one and sending these wishes my way. Regards. Shrineetee.
Date: 12/20/2015 12:45:00 AM
Hi Shrineetee, awesome win. Linda
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Date: 12/20/2015 1:18:00 AM
Hello. Thank you for visiting this one. Shrineetee.
Date: 12/19/2015 2:07:00 PM
Shirinteetee, congratulations on your nice win. SKAT
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Date: 12/19/2015 11:55:00 PM
Thank you. Appreciate. Shrineetee.
Date: 12/19/2015 11:19:00 AM
many congrats Shrineetee on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 12/19/2015 11:55:00 PM
Thanks Jan for visiting this one and sending wishes my way. Regards, Shrineetee.
Date: 12/19/2015 6:36:00 AM
Shrineetee, **Hidden are the words TREMBLES AND THRILLS but its there screaming within the lines particularly inscribed in the 3rd and 4th stanza artistically and creatively done… BIG CONGRATULATIONS! I thank you for participating in the contest.. =`)~Olive Eloisa
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Date: 12/19/2015 7:16:00 AM
Thank you. It is an honour to be placed so high in the contest. Appreciated. Regards, Shrineetee.
Date: 12/19/2015 2:41:00 AM
This is lovely, very trembly and thrilly, Shrineetee. Congratulations! Viv
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Date: 12/19/2015 11:56:00 PM
Thanks for sending these wishes my way. Regards. Shrineetee.
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