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Trembles and Thrills

Two of us, in woods With emotions in their nudes The greenest pastures And all of them on our side A paradise bona fide Song in air, I hear sweet fragrance that I revere Spring in my feet and An Idea in my mind As she is around and near None to listen and Perfume making me hasten Pace in my step and An impish tinge in the scheme I hold her tight and fasten Rhythm of the breaths The tune of falling dew drops Blue moon as witness With the dreamy clouds beneath Smiles on top, love underneath Did I see a Dream? Was it all I imagined? It does not matter I can still feel the moonlight Bathed in the love and delight Dec 10, 2015. For the Contest 'Trembles and Thrills' By Olive Eloisa Guillermo

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Date: 12/23/2015 6:29:00 AM
Congrats!
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Date: 12/23/2015 11:40:00 PM
Thanks for visiting this one and sending these wishes my way. Regards. Shrineetee.
Date: 12/20/2015 12:45:00 AM
Hi Shrineetee, awesome win. Linda
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Date: 12/20/2015 1:18:00 AM
Hello. Thank you for visiting this one. Shrineetee.
Date: 12/19/2015 2:07:00 PM
Shirinteetee, congratulations on your nice win. SKAT
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Date: 12/19/2015 11:55:00 PM
Thank you. Appreciate. Shrineetee.
Date: 12/19/2015 11:19:00 AM
many congrats Shrineetee on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 12/19/2015 11:55:00 PM
Thanks Jan for visiting this one and sending wishes my way. Regards, Shrineetee.
Date: 12/19/2015 6:36:00 AM
Shrineetee, **Hidden are the words TREMBLES AND THRILLS but its there screaming within the lines particularly inscribed in the 3rd and 4th stanza artistically and creatively done… BIG CONGRATULATIONS! I thank you for participating in the contest.. =`)~Olive Eloisa
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Date: 12/19/2015 7:16:00 AM
Thank you. It is an honour to be placed so high in the contest. Appreciated. Regards, Shrineetee.
Date: 12/19/2015 2:41:00 AM
This is lovely, very trembly and thrilly, Shrineetee. Congratulations! Viv
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Shrineetee Kar
Date: 12/19/2015 11:56:00 PM
Thanks for sending these wishes my way. Regards. Shrineetee.

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