Trembles and Thrills

Trembles and Thrills, from a frozen delight
into my tummy, brain freeze from eating ice cream
Its yummy a thrill, my tummy trembles from taste

Vanilla, Chocolate, pistachio, are my faves
when placed on a cone, I shove it into my mouth
The flavors of my taste buds, I'll eat them every day

Passing a truck, with music that plays
its antique, reminding me of summers long ago
to hear is like a symphony, a concert on wheels

I run till I catch it, out of breath I am
huffing and puffing, my heart races at top speed
I caught it, yes I did now I can breathe deeply

Trembles and thrills, I'm eating ice cream
Please don't ever finish, you are so delicious
The satisfaction inside, causing trembles and thrills
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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December 20, 2015 at 12:48 AM
Tiffany, awesome win. Linda
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December 19, 2015 at 2:10 PM
Tiffany, congratulations on your nice win. SKAT
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December 19, 2015 at 6:02 AM
Yummy Yummy Tifffany congratulations on your win!!!
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December 19, 2015 at 2:59 AM
Scrumptious write, Tiffany, well done. And mind how you cross the road. Viv x
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December 19, 2015 at 2:37 AM
Tiffany, *** I love how you presented the theme just I couldn't place this higher or mention it as HM, I like best the 2nd to the last stanza,,kudos! Thanks for participating!~Olive Eloisa =`)
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