Trees

What is this spring if, laden with grief,
I have a wish to see trees coming into leaf

And their foliage nourishing, beginning afresh –
And being as soft as the touch of Zaldania’s flesh;

And their verdance gleaming in the sun,
Where children can hide and seek and have fun.

A wish to lie beneath the trees and watch the stars,
At night when breeze sways humbly the grass;

And the boughs of trees rustling in the cold,
Like something almost being told.

A wish to hear jovial birds chirping in trees during the day –
To relish their melodies and their vernal songs and be gay;

A wish to lo and behold with a smile, trees growing high,
Come new season, they seem to say with a beseeching sigh;

And wash away these shriveled leaves again,
So we can blossom new lease of grain –

And help recover the branches that were cut into wood,
By these people who reside in the neighbourhood; 

A wish to sit and watch the trees dance,
To fulfill my leisure whilst I enjoy their glance.

And sing a jolly song as I watch them shake,
Hence slumber in their shadow and tarry to wake;

Just like they once died and then began anew,
I also wish that if I die I come back too.

O dreadful this spring if, laden with grief,
I have a wish to see the trees coming into leaf.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 2/11/2015 7:20:00 AM
Choene, Your write and the imagery here are both quite enchanting. I can see that you put some careful thought and precision in on this poem. Very well-done, and the pitch and tenor of the verses are blend well and are most inviting. Bravo!! A 7+ and FAV. Best Wishes, Gary
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Date: 2/13/2015 10:45:00 AM
Thanks yet again Gary for your most becoming comments. It takes deep inspiration to write these kind of poems, especially when you want them to rhyme, but I enjoy a rhyming poetry like no other. Gratitute for the 7+ and FAV, Choene
Date: 2/10/2015 12:12:00 AM
G'day Choene... I enjoy reading poems depicting nature and yours about a tree welcoming spring which does lift our spirits once we see the bud burst. A tree is like a city for it harbours so much diverse life. Thank you Choene - Lindsay
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Date: 2/10/2015 3:48:00 AM
O thanks Lindsay, I really appreciate it to know that people enjoy my work. I just hope my poetry is never disappointing. I'll give my best in every piece of writing to ensure the best quality ever. Always best, Choene
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