Tree Troll Twister

A three-toed tree troll
tried to trap a leaping leprechaun
with a black claw bear paw trap.
But he stubbed toe three in the trap in the tree,
Snip snap toe three was gone.

The two-toed tree troll
tried to trap a laughing leprechaun
with a black claw bear paw trap.
But soon he'd forget where the trap had been set,
Snip snap toe two was gone.

The one-toed tree troll
tried to trap a sleepy leprechaun
with a black claw bear paw trap.
“Go to bed,” he said, “while you still have your head,”
Snip snap now all are gone.


Submitted January 2020 for the "Twist My Tongue" contest sponsored by Nina Parmenter -- First Place
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Gauthier Avatar
January 28, 2021 at 5:14 PM
What a charming poem ~ not sure it would qualify as a children's bedtime story. LOL A FAVE for me
Cohen Avatar
January 28, 2021 at 6:13 PM
Good to hear from you, Line, and many thanks for the kind words.
Laurie Avatar
July 26, 2020 at 9:28 PM
G'day Eric ... what an interesting, fun, unique verse. Enjoyable to read indeed - thanks Eric - Lindsay
Cohen Avatar
July 27, 2020 at 11:18 AM
Thanks, Lindsay. Couldn't resist Nina's challenge to create a tongue twister.
Bush Avatar
February 24, 2020 at 2:20 PM
This is totally top drawer. Love it!
Mcferran Avatar
February 21, 2020 at 9:32 PM
What terrific, silly fun!! Love this! ;)
Barden Avatar
January 26, 2020 at 5:06 AM
Glad to see this at the top, My Friend, and you getting some exposure here - it was but a matter of time. Wonderful tongue-twisting device in this, with a great little story to go along - congrats on your win, Eric! :o)
Hawley Avatar
January 24, 2020 at 1:06 PM
What an EXCELLENT poem and great tongue twister. Congrats on your top win!
Wolf Avatar
January 23, 2020 at 9:21 PM
Whoa! My tongue (and my whole jaw) gave out 1/2-way through. Whew! Richly-deserved top prize, Eric! Smiles, Gershon
Dietrich Avatar
January 23, 2020 at 7:18 PM
very cute, Eric. Congrats on top win!
Allison Avatar
January 23, 2020 at 1:56 PM
a very clever tongue twister Eric, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
Gauthier Avatar
January 21, 2020 at 7:21 PM
Charming write, Eric. Really enjoyed. Congrats on a well deserved gold medal win.
Bagnall Avatar
January 21, 2020 at 5:23 PM
Congrats on first place, nice story
Lamoureux Avatar
January 21, 2020 at 4:22 PM
Fine formidable fun! Congrats on top placement.
Leiser Avatar
January 21, 2020 at 3:22 PM
This is so fun and clever, Eric! Congrats on your top win! :)
Rodrigues Avatar
January 21, 2020 at 3:12 PM
Cross-eyed tongue twister! Nice! Congrats!
Goldsmith Avatar
January 21, 2020 at 1:57 PM
Congratulations on your win. Sooooo cute. Have a great day...............
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