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Tree of Life

If tree leaves were days
the leaves from the tree of life
would tell our story

Edward J Ebbs - 04/28/2015


Written for a Contest, “Days”
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Deschler Avatar
May 23, 2015 at 12:47 PM
I agree, Ed. We do need to make every day memorable... I enjoyed this poem and it's positive message. Very nice work!
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June 12, 2015 at 6:57 PM
Thank you Kelly :)
Haight Avatar
May 15, 2015 at 10:12 PM
Such a lovely, meaningful Haiku, Ed. So much to think about in so few words. Congratulations on your win in the "Days" contest. Sandra
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May 16, 2015 at 8:41 PM
Thank You Sandra :)
Onclaud Avatar
May 15, 2015 at 2:58 PM
impeccable, ed... sweet congrats!
Ebbs Avatar
May 15, 2015 at 9:44 PM
Thank you :)
A  Avatar
May 10, 2015 at 11:22 AM
Ed, enjoyed the haiku. Hugs *SKAT*
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May 10, 2015 at 11:44 PM
Thank you again :)
La France Avatar
May 7, 2015 at 7:52 AM
ED, so much emotion in three little lines, so true, 7, and congratulations on your placement in the contest and thanks for visiting my poem, springtime flowers, my mother always talked to her flowers so when she died I planted some of her own at her tomb, they are thriving there (actually a bit too much thriving)
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May 8, 2015 at 2:08 PM
Thank you, your mother was a big part of your life, Sunday is Mother's day...I hope your Sunday is filled with memories of the times you had with your mother leaving you with a smile. ~ Peace
Roper Avatar
May 5, 2015 at 4:20 PM
Congratulations on your win! Blessings dear friend Eve
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May 6, 2015 at 1:38 PM
Thank you Roper :)
A  Avatar
May 3, 2015 at 9:27 PM
Hi Ed, Congrats on your awesome win. Forever ~SKAT~
Ebbs Avatar
May 3, 2015 at 10:33 PM
Thanks again :)
Leiser Avatar
May 3, 2015 at 7:13 PM
I've always been fascinated by the idea of the tree of life, and your poem was a great visual! Congrats on your win, as well :)
Ebbs Avatar
May 3, 2015 at 8:40 PM
Thank You Laura :)
Dietrich Avatar
May 3, 2015 at 5:09 PM
this is really really good, Ed. I don't see any congrats, but I sure hope it won in the contest. I will go see and if you don't see me back here it means you DID make the list, so I am sending you an early CONGRATS
Ebbs Avatar
May 3, 2015 at 8:39 PM
Thank You Andrea :)
Konos Avatar
May 3, 2015 at 4:28 PM
Now that's a WOW WOW
Ebbs Avatar
May 3, 2015 at 8:39 PM
:) Thanks Judy!
La France Avatar
April 29, 2015 at 8:19 PM
Ed, so beautiful, 7, best of luck in contest, a winner for sure and thanks for visiting my captcha poem
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April 29, 2015 at 11:22 PM
Luck is good :) Thank you Broken :)
Gifford Avatar
April 29, 2015 at 7:15 AM
Maybe they do!
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April 29, 2015 at 2:04 PM
Thank You Darlene :)
Allison Avatar
April 29, 2015 at 2:44 AM
Very clever haiku Ed :-) Good luck in the contest:-) Hugs jan xx
Ebbs Avatar
April 29, 2015 at 2:04 PM
Thank you Jan:)
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