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Tree Lined Avenue

Tree lined avenue Ochres and yellows display Graciously they fall In carpet gown, soil enriched In life they shone, now they're gone .

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/8/2014 8:00:00 AM

Love the color..It is sad when the beautiful color is gone..Very expressive and descriptive work..Enjoyed reading it today..Sara

James Fraser
Date: 12/8/2014 1:24:00 PM

Thank you Sara, lovely to see you here, James :)

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 12/8/2014 3:23:00 AM

for me, on the first 4lines you are describing autumn and on the last it seems you describing winter.. correct me if am wrong? ........ Olive Eloisa thinking.. :)!

James Fraser
Date: 12/8/2014 1:20:00 PM

Most definitely Autumn Olive, latterly describing that once there in bloom, they're gone. But your not that far away, James :)

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 12/7/2014 10:54:00 PM

An amazing beauty James

James Fraser
Date: 12/8/2014 1:16:00 PM

Thank you Charmaine, and throughout the lands there is indeed amazing beauties in nature, James :)x

Jan Allison

Date: 12/7/2014 4:54:00 PM

you are on fire tonight my friend:-) Hugs jan xx

James Fraser
Date: 12/7/2014 5:21:00 PM

Simply a few thoughts into a few words. Thank you, James xx

Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 12/7/2014 4:34:00 PM

Hi James! Beautiful tanka! I really love it! Have a wonderful evening my dear friend! A 7 for you! :) Love and hugs! xxxxx D.

James Fraser
Date: 12/7/2014 4:37:00 PM

Thank you :)