Tree Lined Avenue

Tree lined avenue Ochres and yellows display Graciously they fall In carpet gown, soil enriched In life they shone, now they're gone .
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Kendrick Avatar
December 8, 2014 at 8:00 AM
Love the color..It is sad when the beautiful color is gone..Very expressive and descriptive work..Enjoyed reading it today..Sara
Fraser Avatar
December 8, 2014 at 1:24 PM
Thank you Sara, lovely to see you here, James :)
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
December 8, 2014 at 3:23 AM
for me, on the first 4lines you are describing autumn and on the last it seems you describing winter.. correct me if am wrong? ........ Olive Eloisa thinking.. :)!
Fraser Avatar
December 8, 2014 at 1:20 PM
Most definitely Autumn Olive, latterly describing that once there in bloom, they're gone. But your not that far away, James :)
Chircop Avatar
December 7, 2014 at 10:54 PM
An amazing beauty James
Fraser Avatar
December 8, 2014 at 1:16 PM
Thank you Charmaine, and throughout the lands there is indeed amazing beauties in nature, James :)x
Allison Avatar
December 7, 2014 at 4:54 PM
you are on fire tonight my friend:-) Hugs jan xx
Fraser Avatar
December 7, 2014 at 5:21 PM
Simply a few thoughts into a few words. Thank you, James xx
Petersen Potter Avatar
December 7, 2014 at 4:34 PM
Hi James! Beautiful tanka! I really love it! Have a wonderful evening my dear friend! A 7 for you! :) Love and hugs! xxxxx D.
Fraser Avatar
December 7, 2014 at 4:37 PM
Thank you :)
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