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Tree Lined Avenue

Tree lined avenue Ochres and yellows display Graciously they fall In carpet gown, soil enriched In life they shone, now they're gone .

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014


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Sara Kendrick
Date: 12/8/2014 8:00:00 AM
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Love the color..It is sad when the beautiful color is gone..Very expressive and descriptive work..Enjoyed reading it today..Sara
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James Fraser
Date: 12/8/2014 1:24:00 PM
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Thank you Sara, lovely to see you here, James :)
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 12/8/2014 3:23:00 AM
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for me, on the first 4lines you are describing autumn and on the last it seems you describing winter.. correct me if am wrong? ........ Olive Eloisa thinking.. :)!
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James Fraser
Date: 12/8/2014 1:20:00 PM
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Most definitely Autumn Olive, latterly describing that once there in bloom, they're gone. But your not that far away, James :)
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Charmaine Chircop
Date: 12/7/2014 10:54:00 PM
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An amazing beauty James
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James Fraser
Date: 12/8/2014 1:16:00 PM
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Thank you Charmaine, and throughout the lands there is indeed amazing beauties in nature, James :)x
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Jan Allison
Date: 12/7/2014 4:54:00 PM
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you are on fire tonight my friend:-) Hugs jan xx
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James Fraser
Date: 12/7/2014 5:21:00 PM
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Simply a few thoughts into a few words. Thank you, James xx
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Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 12/7/2014 4:34:00 PM
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Hi James! Beautiful tanka! I really love it! Have a wonderful evening my dear friend! A 7 for you! :) Love and hugs! xxxxx D.
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James Fraser
Date: 12/7/2014 4:37:00 PM
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Thank you :)

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