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An old earthy being Defined by many species Of fruit, colors, shapes and smells I often change with temperature and light I stand tall and strong and weather many storms My limbs are often heavy, green and full of fruit and nuts Most creatures like to live and feed on me and rest on my parts I am awakened by spring and summer with longer days as sunlight warms As days get shorter I feel tired fighting heavier winds and cold as my parts fall fall and break to the ground at my feet leaving me naked and barren I am dreadful of winter my trunk dampened by blankets of white insulating me at my feet I will sleep Until spring wakes me

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Date: 11/30/2020 1:04:00 AM
Wow! Thanks for sharing this. God bless you.
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 11/30/2020 3:06:00 AM
Thank you Beata!
Date: 11/29/2020 9:03:00 PM
Lovely shape and story line. Many congrats on your win, dear Tania.
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 11/30/2020 3:07:00 AM
Thank you Elaine!
Date: 11/29/2020 3:21:00 PM
Congrats on your winning work. Yes, doing these shapes isn't an easy endeavor but you did really well with it.Uniquely you. Sara
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 11/29/2020 5:05:00 PM
Thank you Sara!
Date: 11/29/2020 11:28:00 AM
- Congratulations on your win in the "SHAPE UP" contest, Tania :) - // Anne-Lise :)
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 11/29/2020 12:57:00 PM
Thank you Anne-Lise! :)
Date: 2/25/2019 7:49:00 AM
This is just beautifully composed Tania. Congratulations on having it featured!
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 2/25/2019 11:38:00 AM
Thank you!
Date: 2/25/2019 7:24:00 AM
This is a wonderful concrete poem. Congratulations on your much deserved win, Tania. This is not easy! The words are as lovely as the vision.
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 2/25/2019 11:39:00 AM
Thank you!
Date: 2/25/2019 5:17:00 AM
excellent shape poem
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 2/25/2019 6:19:00 AM
Thank you!
Date: 6/25/2018 3:57:00 PM
Oh my! A beautiful concrete. I do not understand how these are done and you have created a masterpiece. Congratulations on your win!
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 6/25/2018 4:37:00 PM
thank you!
Date: 6/25/2018 7:31:00 AM
Congratulations for your win Tania :)
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 6/25/2018 10:07:00 AM
thank you
Date: 6/24/2018 4:16:00 PM
what a superb concrete form, congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 6/24/2018 4:20:00 PM
thank you!
Date: 6/24/2018 2:34:00 PM
In nature, I think only flowers seem as alive as trees-- congrats, Tania
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 6/24/2018 3:53:00 PM
thank you
Date: 6/24/2018 10:21:00 AM
Remarkable concrete poem, Tania. I'm so clueless about this type of poem that I stand in awe gaping at your ability to pull it off so well! Congrats, too, on your placement in the contest. Best wishes, Gershon Wolf
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 6/24/2018 10:28:00 AM
Thank you so much for your kind words.
Date: 6/23/2018 9:22:00 PM
A beautiful concrete Tania both in form and content. A very enjoyable poem. Congratulations on your wonderful win. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 6/23/2018 9:42:00 PM
Thank you Susan
Date: 6/23/2018 2:49:00 PM
Awesome concrete, Tania. Congrats on your well deserved win.
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 6/23/2018 3:01:00 PM
thank you!
Date: 6/10/2018 9:17:00 PM
A super solid concrete poem, a delight to read. Mick
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 6/11/2018 11:00:00 AM
thank you
Date: 6/10/2018 9:31:00 AM
A very good concrete write ... It was a pleasure to go through ...
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 6/10/2018 9:36:00 AM
thank you
Date: 6/10/2018 9:20:00 AM
Wonderful Concrete Tania! Poem picture perfect :) xomo!
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 6/10/2018 9:36:00 AM
thank you
Date: 6/10/2018 8:37:00 AM
Nice concept...and a lovely write...All the best Tania
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 6/10/2018 8:55:00 AM
thank you!
Date: 6/10/2018 8:26:00 AM
Very creative! Well done Tania :)
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 6/10/2018 8:55:00 AM
thank you!

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