Tree

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An old earthy being Defined by many species Of fruit, colors, shapes and smells I often change with temperature and light I stand tall and strong and weather many storms My limbs are often heavy, green and full of fruit and nuts Most creatures like to live and feed on me and rest on my parts I am awakened by spring and summer with longer days as sunlight warms As days get shorter I feel tired fighting heavier winds and cold as my parts fall fall and break to the ground at my feet leaving me naked and barren I am dreadful of winter my trunk dampened by blankets of white insulating me at my feet I will sleep Until spring wakes me
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Agustin Avatar
November 30, 2020 at 1:04 AM
Wow! Thanks for sharing this. God bless you.
Kitchin Avatar
November 30, 2020 at 3:06 AM
Thank you Beata!
George   Avatar
November 29, 2020 at 9:03 PM
Lovely shape and story line. Many congrats on your win, dear Tania.
Kitchin Avatar
November 30, 2020 at 3:07 AM
Thank you Elaine!
Kendrick Avatar
November 29, 2020 at 3:21 PM
Congrats on your winning work. Yes, doing these shapes isn't an easy endeavor but you did really well with it.Uniquely you. Sara
Kitchin Avatar
November 29, 2020 at 5:05 PM
Thank you Sara!
Andresen Avatar
November 29, 2020 at 11:28 AM
- Congratulations on your win in the "SHAPE UP" contest, Tania :) - // Anne-Lise :)
Kitchin Avatar
November 29, 2020 at 12:57 PM
Thank you Anne-Lise! :)
Marcum Wong Avatar
February 25, 2019 at 7:49 AM
This is just beautifully composed Tania. Congratulations on having it featured!
Kitchin Avatar
February 25, 2019 at 11:38 AM
Thank you!
Krutsinger Avatar
February 25, 2019 at 7:24 AM
This is a wonderful concrete poem. Congratulations on your much deserved win, Tania. This is not easy! The words are as lovely as the vision.
Kitchin Avatar
February 25, 2019 at 11:39 AM
Thank you!
Bangalee Avatar
February 25, 2019 at 5:17 AM
excellent shape poem
Kitchin Avatar
February 25, 2019 at 6:19 AM
Thank you!
Gentry Avatar
June 25, 2018 at 3:57 PM
Oh my! A beautiful concrete. I do not understand how these are done and you have created a masterpiece. Congratulations on your win!
Kitchin Avatar
June 25, 2018 at 4:37 PM
thank you!
Sands Avatar
June 25, 2018 at 7:31 AM
Congratulations for your win Tania :)
Kitchin Avatar
June 25, 2018 at 10:07 AM
thank you
Allison Avatar
June 24, 2018 at 4:16 PM
what a superb concrete form, congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
Kitchin Avatar
June 24, 2018 at 4:20 PM
thank you!
Carber Avatar
June 24, 2018 at 2:34 PM
In nature, I think only flowers seem as alive as trees-- congrats, Tania
Kitchin Avatar
June 24, 2018 at 3:53 PM
thank you
Wolf Avatar
June 24, 2018 at 10:21 AM
Remarkable concrete poem, Tania. I'm so clueless about this type of poem that I stand in awe gaping at your ability to pull it off so well! Congrats, too, on your placement in the contest. Best wishes, Gershon Wolf
Kitchin Avatar
June 24, 2018 at 10:28 AM
Thank you so much for your kind words.
Ashley Avatar
June 23, 2018 at 9:22 PM
A beautiful concrete Tania both in form and content. A very enjoyable poem. Congratulations on your wonderful win. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Kitchin Avatar
June 23, 2018 at 9:42 PM
Thank you Susan
Gauthier Avatar
June 23, 2018 at 2:49 PM
Awesome concrete, Tania. Congrats on your well deserved win.
Kitchin Avatar
June 23, 2018 at 3:01 PM
thank you!
Talbot Avatar
June 10, 2018 at 9:17 PM
A super solid concrete poem, a delight to read. Mick
Kitchin Avatar
June 11, 2018 at 11:00 AM
thank you
Gupta Avatar
June 10, 2018 at 9:31 AM
A very good concrete write ... It was a pleasure to go through ...
Kitchin Avatar
June 10, 2018 at 9:36 AM
thank you
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June 10, 2018 at 9:20 AM
Wonderful Concrete Tania! Poem picture perfect :) xomo!
Kitchin Avatar
June 10, 2018 at 9:36 AM
thank you
Michael Avatar
June 10, 2018 at 8:37 AM
Nice concept...and a lovely write...All the best Tania
Kitchin Avatar
June 10, 2018 at 8:55 AM
thank you!
Sands Avatar
June 10, 2018 at 8:26 AM
Very creative! Well done Tania :)
Kitchin Avatar
June 10, 2018 at 8:55 AM
thank you!
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