Treating You

“How’s life treating you?” A neighbor 
Recently inquired.
He’s a working dad and I’m
A nana, long retired.

“I can’t complain,” was my reply,
“Or rather, I will not.”
For what’s the point when, after all,
I’m grateful for a lot.

The elevators in our building
Finally both work
So endless waiting is no more
What many weeks did irk.

I’m happy for the little things;
There isn’t much to gain
From doing what I often do -
Carp, grumble and complain!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Leffanta Avatar
February 24, 2020 at 12:18 PM
One of our elevators was out of service for nine months waiting for parts from the mainland, so I do admire your verses! Aloha! Rico
Allison Avatar
February 23, 2020 at 6:47 PM
you always make me smile with your words Ilene - I know we have so much to be thankful for in life:-) hugs Jan xx
Turner Avatar
February 23, 2020 at 6:30 PM
Glad to know all is well. Ilene.
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