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(Misery's Ghost) Dreaming with my eyes wide open Ultra Death sits by the bedside On your knees, you are crying! Along the floor, now you are dying! Swallowing the pain inside, demanding for the reaper himself If you want to see dead people This GHOST will bring you face to face with the luminance Once you cross over, you're in absolute fright Lost in a desire to see the spirit world, Drowning to be a part of it !!! . Can you hear that low bubbling noise rising up from within? Wait, wait that is, he or she…. *The dead* No... You are still gurgling of your stomach, is it? This hunger is not indigestion, it is Mount KILLomen about to blow The Ghost Effect enters the soul, in pieces after the first glow A 'Ghost so potent enough, it will wipe you off the face of the earth Like a trace, every fragment of this Ghost is a killer If you are kindling it, you might not live to tell Find a way to exercise it with extreme caution When ‘The Ghost’ is around There is no going back, once you have experienced it You’ll never encounter a way to fight off this evil intrusion! After you've lived, the ghost will haunt 'long after the soul is gone First, the sensation that you're buried alive, Then the frightening phenomena feeling begins The ghoul is trapped and clawing its way to the surface Savor the evening with pain until they come to claim what is left Living loud, with a tortured soul Having inherited- SATAN'S BLOOD This Ghost has a forked tongue Misery made everyone believe that he was just another ghost Until you see, ‘The Ghost’ and what he or she has done? Experiencing how it makes the blood boil like a thousand fiery lashes Falling from, Satan's whip, only hope can escape his snare Wishing for a Laxative To flush the insanity, that haunts through the years Calling this The End………… By: P and The Ghost-CoWriter

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 10/13/2015 2:53:00 PM
my twin poem. SIS, Congratulations on your own favorite Halloween Poem. Take Care **SKAT**
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Date: 10/13/2015 12:33:00 AM
Congrats on ur awesome winning write Linda!
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Date: 10/10/2015 1:29:00 AM
An eerie verse you have written this time Linda! A true, wonderful Halloween literary treat, lolest.... Congrats for your WIN in Carol Eastman's contest! ;-)
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Date: 10/9/2015 4:50:00 PM
Thank You for entering my contest with your Halloween poem. Spooky and definite Halloween material.
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Date: 6/12/2014 3:06:00 AM
I just found myself reading the last line of this poem not knowing how i got there...it is very captivating and scaring at the same time..good work.
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Date: 4/4/2014 1:39:00 PM
This one makes my hair stand on end.
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Date: 10/24/2013 5:03:00 PM
A very dark and sinister, and dramatic poem, Linda! It is fitting, since Halloween is just around the corner! Fantastic work!...Thank you so much for the wonderful comments! They mean a lot to me! :) ...I am sending you a soupmail...
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Date: 9/23/2013 4:44:00 PM
I love the poem and want to thank you for a warm greeting I'm only 11 and fairly new to the world of poetry but am already a published poet. Thanks again.
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Date: 12/19/2012 6:39:00 PM
Jeepers! So spooky! :o0 Nice one...
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Date: 12/9/2012 3:55:00 PM
Yikes, you're all dressed up like Mrs Claus, but where's the "treat"? Hot and spicy cookie happening here PD. Well penned, this 'dramatic dialogue'! Hope your holidays will be happy ones.:) Love, Mikki
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Date: 12/6/2012 8:45:00 AM
Gripping write! I love this kind of poetry, dark and deep. Enjoyed, and when it comes to posting my poems here, I'm afraid I can't share'em all 'cause some of my poems are just too personal and it's best if they are kept on my computer! But I'm really glad you liked everything that I've posted so far and I appreciate all your comments for sure. Have a nice day Linda. -- Sean
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Date: 12/4/2012 9:09:00 PM
ah yes my sweet the words do flow, a laxative weak an maybe slow, could be the end of me, cos i dunno, if the Satans up this creek, or the ghost will take me 4 a freak, cos damnit i wont go! :)
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Date: 12/3/2012 8:55:00 PM
Wow PD, this is fabulous, it makes me very afraid at what might come, strongly portrayed!
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Date: 11/30/2012 6:47:00 PM
Oookkkkaaaay!! Somehow I missed this one. I love it! Did you read my dramatic verse? It's a little scarey....Thanks for the comments..Love, Holly
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Date: 11/23/2012 7:22:00 PM
Well--thanks for the comment. This is not a serene subject. I am not a fan of being afraid, but sometimes can't help but feel fear. I guess you're saying that once released, there is no going back. Interesting title. If the treat is this bad, I'd hate to know what the trick is.
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Date: 11/17/2012 7:26:00 AM
Can you send a laxative now? Enjoyed your scary write too much, I'm afraid I won't be able to sleep anymore! Great write, PD! Love, Hanitra
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Date: 11/14/2012 3:03:00 PM
hey were you in that contest, PD? the one of Susan's? Hope to see you in more contests!!
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Date: 11/11/2012 3:14:00 PM
Thanks or stopping by to say hi! Wish you the very best and have a wonderful Thanksgiving! Take care! JP
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Date: 11/10/2012 11:31:00 PM
well pd my bff i have been trying for hours most of today to view your poetry list ..to no avail till now ..ron is a persistent guy and i am utterly frustrated with ps being unable to help me out and fix things for me .oh oh .. btw .. a fascinating write luv .. glad it is not the reality for u .. hope i can view another treat of yours before we call 'lights out' bff for life ..
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Date: 11/9/2012 2:38:00 PM
Yup, that is what I need to get back in my head; a lax, the grisly effects of this will keep me on the move for awhile PD. So glad it's a figment of your imagination and not true! Love, Lizzie
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Date: 11/6/2012 5:36:00 PM
The poem draws a real scary picture. A nice presentation -very dramatic. Thanks PD for admiring my Tanka Kiss of Death. You are always very kind. Love. -Mohammad
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Date: 11/4/2012 4:43:00 AM
What a lovely belated halloween treat that was. The trick must be a laxatively haunted evening. Enjoyed. Thank you pd.
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Date: 11/4/2012 1:45:00 AM
Hi, my dear sisie! Always salute and thumbs up to all your great masterpieces and work especially the dramatic monologue or dramatic verses (always a tremendous write of yours). I'm trying to identify the difference between dramatic monologue and dramatic verses so I'm spending more time on the soup now going and reading the examples of yours. You know, I'm so interested in this form 'coz I love declamations, speeches and orations when I was a child and younger years, lol. I joined many contests b4 ;))
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Date: 11/3/2012 11:34:00 AM
WOW! Girl you have an awesome mind to come up with something like this. This is one great write. Thanks for sharing. Lucy
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Date: 11/3/2012 8:41:00 AM
Revisiting this explosive write once again,pd, really great!! jag
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