Treat

(Misery's Ghost)

Dreaming with my eyes wide open
Ultra Death sits by the bedside 

On your knees, you are crying!
Along the floor, now you are dying!
Swallowing the pain inside, demanding for the reaper himself
If you want to see dead people
This GHOST will bring you face to face with the luminance
Once you cross over, you're in absolute fright
Lost in a desire to see the spirit world, 
Drowning to be a part of it
          !!!               .
Can you hear that low bubbling noise rising up from within?
Wait, wait that is, he or she…. *The dead*
No... You are still gurgling of your stomach, is it?
This hunger is not indigestion, it is Mount KILLomen about to blow
The Ghost Effect enters the soul, in pieces after the first glow

A 'Ghost so potent enough, it will wipe you off the face of the earth
Like a trace, every fragment of this Ghost is a killer 
If you are kindling it, you might not live to tell
Find a way to exercise it with extreme caution
When ‘The Ghost’ is around
There is no going back, once you have experienced it
You’ll never encounter a way to fight off this evil intrusion!
After you've lived, the ghost will haunt 'long after the soul is gone
First, the sensation that you're buried alive, 
Then the frightening phenomena feeling begins
The ghoul is trapped and clawing its way to the surface 
 
Savor the evening with pain until they come to claim what is left
Living loud, with a tortured soul
Having inherited- SATAN'S BLOOD
This Ghost has a forked tongue
Misery made everyone believe that he was just another ghost
Until you see, ‘The Ghost’ and what he or she has done? 
Experiencing how it makes the blood boil like a thousand fiery lashes 
Falling from, Satan's whip, only hope can escape his snare

Wishing for a Laxative
To flush the insanity, that haunts through the years
Calling this The End………… 

By: P and The Ghost-CoWriter
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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October 13, 2015 at 2:53 PM
my twin poem. SIS, Congratulations on your own favorite Halloween Poem. Take Care **SKAT**
A. Sharma Avatar
October 13, 2015 at 12:33 AM
Congrats on ur awesome winning write Linda!
Kimathi Avatar
October 10, 2015 at 1:29 AM
An eerie verse you have written this time Linda! A true, wonderful Halloween literary treat, lolest.... Congrats for your WIN in Carol Eastman's contest! ;-)
Eastman Avatar
October 9, 2015 at 4:50 PM
Thank You for entering my contest with your Halloween poem. Spooky and definite Halloween material.
Asanya Avatar
June 12, 2014 at 3:06 AM
I just found myself reading the last line of this poem not knowing how i got there...it is very captivating and scaring at the same time..good work.
Lamoureux Avatar
April 4, 2014 at 1:39 PM
This one makes my hair stand on end.
Deschler Avatar
October 24, 2013 at 5:03 PM
A very dark and sinister, and dramatic poem, Linda! It is fitting, since Halloween is just around the corner! Fantastic work!...Thank you so much for the wonderful comments! They mean a lot to me! :) ...I am sending you a soupmail...
Isaacson Avatar
September 23, 2013 at 4:44 PM
I love the poem and want to thank you for a warm greeting I'm only 11 and fairly new to the world of poetry but am already a published poet. Thanks again.
Kearley Avatar
December 19, 2012 at 6:39 PM
Jeepers! So spooky! :o0 Nice one...
Mac Donald Avatar
December 9, 2012 at 3:55 PM
Yikes, you're all dressed up like Mrs Claus, but where's the "treat"? Hot and spicy cookie happening here PD. Well penned, this 'dramatic dialogue'! Hope your holidays will be happy ones.:) Love, Mikki
Goodwin Avatar
December 6, 2012 at 8:45 AM
Gripping write! I love this kind of poetry, dark and deep. Enjoyed, and when it comes to posting my poems here, I'm afraid I can't share'em all 'cause some of my poems are just too personal and it's best if they are kept on my computer! But I'm really glad you liked everything that I've posted so far and I appreciate all your comments for sure. Have a nice day Linda. -- Sean
Johnson Avatar
December 4, 2012 at 9:09 PM
ah yes my sweet the words do flow, a laxative weak an maybe slow, could be the end of me, cos i dunno, if the Satans up this creek, or the ghost will take me 4 a freak, cos damnit i wont go! :)
Harper Avatar
December 3, 2012 at 8:55 PM
Wow PD, this is fabulous, it makes me very afraid at what might come, strongly portrayed!
Moore Avatar
November 30, 2012 at 6:47 PM
Oookkkkaaaay!! Somehow I missed this one. I love it! Did you read my dramatic verse? It's a little scarey....Thanks for the comments..Love, Holly
Beaufort Avatar
November 23, 2012 at 7:22 PM
Well--thanks for the comment. This is not a serene subject. I am not a fan of being afraid, but sometimes can't help but feel fear. I guess you're saying that once released, there is no going back. Interesting title. If the treat is this bad, I'd hate to know what the trick is.
Rabary-Andriamanday Avatar
November 17, 2012 at 7:26 AM
Can you send a laxative now? Enjoyed your scary write too much, I'm afraid I won't be able to sleep anymore! Great write, PD! Love, Hanitra
Dietrich Avatar
November 14, 2012 at 3:03 PM
hey were you in that contest, PD? the one of Susan's? Hope to see you in more contests!!
Pemberton Avatar
November 11, 2012 at 3:14 PM
Thanks or stopping by to say hi! Wish you the very best and have a wonderful Thanksgiving! Take care! JP
Sweetheart Avatar
November 10, 2012 at 11:31 PM
well pd my bff i have been trying for hours most of today to view your poetry list ..to no avail till now ..ron is a persistent guy and i am utterly frustrated with ps being unable to help me out and fix things for me .oh oh .. btw .. a fascinating write luv .. glad it is not the reality for u .. hope i can view another treat of yours before we call 'lights out' bff for life ..
Wesley Avatar
November 9, 2012 at 2:38 PM
Yup, that is what I need to get back in my head; a lax, the grisly effects of this will keep me on the move for awhile PD. So glad it's a figment of your imagination and not true! Love, Lizzie
Yamin Avatar
November 6, 2012 at 5:36 PM
The poem draws a real scary picture. A nice presentation -very dramatic. Thanks PD for admiring my Tanka Kiss of Death. You are always very kind. Love. -Mohammad
Cavanaugh Avatar
November 4, 2012 at 4:43 AM
What a lovely belated halloween treat that was. The trick must be a laxatively haunted evening. Enjoyed. Thank you pd.
Gasun Avatar
November 4, 2012 at 1:45 AM
Hi, my dear sisie! Always salute and thumbs up to all your great masterpieces and work especially the dramatic monologue or dramatic verses (always a tremendous write of yours). I'm trying to identify the difference between dramatic monologue and dramatic verses so I'm spending more time on the soup now going and reading the examples of yours. You know, I'm so interested in this form 'coz I love declamations, speeches and orations when I was a child and younger years, lol. I joined many contests b4 ;))
Carrillo Avatar
November 3, 2012 at 11:34 AM
WOW! Girl you have an awesome mind to come up with something like this. This is one great write. Thanks for sharing. Lucy
Nair Avatar
November 3, 2012 at 8:41 AM
Revisiting this explosive write once again,pd, really great!! jag
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