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Treasures of the Spider

Thursday, April 26, 2001 12:47:49 AM

Treasures of the Spider

Spider!
Beware of 
the night feeder.
Tiny bat wings, swifter,
than the absence
of light, silent, merciless
terror. 

By morning,
I survey the remnants
of your web, rent and empty
 of you, just tiny whispers
of your once, existence.

Your uneaten prey,
all neatly wrapped 
and dangling-
as a reminder
of all 
that we
can't take to heaven

Suzanne Delaney

Written for a  Golden Orb spider I 
named Spideress.
See note - ScientificName: Nephila maculata

The golden orb weavers are one of the largest spiders. Their webs can be found hanging off sign posts, in or between trees and can even be spotted driving 100 km/h in a vehicle. The females can measure up to 45 mm while the smaller males measure only 6 mm. The male is often found in the web of his girl friend. Beside the male and the female boarders resides in the web. They are called quicksilver, dewdrop or droplet spider because their silvery body shines like drops of water in the sun.

Their webs stretch to a diameter of one meter between  trees. It is easy to accidentally walk straight into one as they sit in the middle of their web.
It belongs to the golden orb weaver family, which is why its silk is yellow, and this silk is the strongest of any spider. Sometimes small birds or bats get caught in it
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Deschler Avatar
October 21, 2022 at 10:20 AM
Quite an interesting write, Suzanne. Fascinating stuff! ... Congratulations on your placement with this great poem!
Delaney Avatar
December 7, 2023 at 7:19 AM
Belated thanks for your kind comment. Kelly: Crazy year with travelling. SuZ
Gondolf Avatar
October 6, 2022 at 6:18 PM
When your time is up you can’t take your treasures with you. Congrats on your win, Suzanne. John
Kerr Avatar
October 6, 2022 at 3:07 PM
Hi Suzanne, Congratulations on your winning placement on merit. Yours is a concise, original, very imaginative entry for this challenge. Thank you so much for your review of my work Howard
Delaney Avatar
October 6, 2022 at 4:13 PM
Thank you, Howard: I love the contests and when I enter I always congratulate all the winners. A great opportunity to read a collection of poems on one theme. Yours, Suzanne
Esquire Avatar
April 7, 2013 at 8:52 PM
Dear Suzanne, So much in life YOU have seen.To write such precision acuratcy.There is a cavernacross from the Cabin and as the Sun disappears the bats stream out distroying every insect from here to the Church Steeple in the valley below.Exactly as YOU describe in YOUR POEM "Treasures of the Spider YOU bring the Reader to the subject Awesome POETIC Artistry.LOVE YOU ALWAYS and FOOREVER YOUR Eternal Liege...Harry
Austin Avatar
April 6, 2013 at 12:47 PM
GooI spider stuff. I've written a couple on the beast myself. Love, daver
Rabary-Andriamanday Avatar
April 5, 2013 at 7:09 PM
"all that we can't take to heaven"... plain truth in simple words; I like your style; it's so poignant. Excellent write, dear Suzanne! Love, Hanitra
Idiong Avatar
April 5, 2013 at 2:57 AM
This is brutal in a lovely fashion.
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