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Treasures From My Past

Treasures from my Past In preparing for the yard sale, I gather all my junk, I wade through the mass of items from decades before From furniture to dishes that have sat down in my basement And I realize that my past will be pushed outside my door. I pick up a box of Royal Albert dishes from a dusty cardboard box, Carefully removing the yellowed newspaper that wrap each plate, Displaying the majestic burgundy strip with 24k gold filigree, Rediscovering those joyful feelings that seem to calm and sedate. Long before the death of my parents and my only aunt, These plates graced the dining room table at all family celebrations. Oh the food, the smells, the faces and the happy times, These plates bring back all the best and warmest sensations. With so many items to keep, each item with its own meaning, The Royal Albert plates unpacked, finally get moved outside at last, To ease my mind I think about the happiness that they can bring, More happy memories for others, can be made from these plates of my past.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 8/28/2011 11:14:00 AM
Congrats on the feature. Nice start. Will be reading more. Vince
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Lee Ramage
Date: 8/28/2011 11:50:00 AM
Thanks Vince for your kind words. Its nice to get the feedback. I've been on PS for about 3 months now, enjoying it a great deal. Lee
Date: 8/23/2011 3:06:00 PM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Lee. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/22/2011 3:32:00 PM
Congradulations for this week (btw...this poem is fantastic). It reminds me of my mother and how she would keep ancient plates >_< NICELY WRITTEN! D. W. Breidenthal "A POSITIVE POE"
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J.W. Earnings
Date: 8/22/2011 3:35:00 PM
Oh one last thing: i just noticed my sister commented on this poem as well!! Epic!
Date: 8/21/2011 11:31:00 PM
Congrats Lee on your featured poem this week on PS.. wonderful to share luv..
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Date: 8/13/2011 12:34:00 PM
Lee, I really enjoyed reading this one. I will try reading your poems from the bottom up one by one since you don't have many posted yet. All I can tell you here is that I am unsure this qualifies as free verse. For me it reads more like prose poetry or narrative (telling a story). I took many of my poems like this which I'd labeled free verse and made a chapbook called prosies. I decided they were more prose than free verse!
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Date: 7/30/2011 8:17:00 PM
Touching expression of the happy memories in the family Lee. Thank you for sharing and also checking on my work. The dragon fruit is now also raised in the Philippines. I do admire the ornamental and medicinal quality of the plant. Dalila
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J.W. Earnings
Date: 8/22/2011 3:36:00 PM
True that! The memories I had in store in my filthy garage still has clean plates! heehee
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Lee Ramage
Date: 7/30/2011 8:31:00 PM
Thanks Dalila, I enjoy your poetry. Lee
Date: 7/22/2011 8:58:00 AM
An interesting and rather poignant write. Parting with anything from our past can be a bit of a wrench sometimes. But as you say, if that can lead to happy memories for others, all is not in vain. Regards, Robert.
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Lee Ramage
Date: 7/25/2011 8:08:00 PM
thanks for the nice comments. Lee
Date: 7/22/2011 4:06:00 AM
You captured the essence of these treasures well, Lee. Enjoyed your poem and welcome to the soup. Thanks you for your comment on my culinary delight. : )
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Lee Ramage
Date: 7/22/2011 7:37:00 AM
I always look forward to reading your poems... love the diet! Lee
Date: 7/2/2011 4:00:00 PM
Great poetry, Lee.
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Lee Ramage
Date: 7/2/2011 7:15:00 PM
Thank you for your kind comments.
Date: 7/2/2011 3:52:00 PM
WOW! Great poem! Your should submit it into the "yard sale" contest if you havn't done so already. They're looking for a poem with this exact subject! Always, Laura
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Lee Ramage
Date: 7/2/2011 7:16:00 PM
Thank you Laura for your reassuring comments. This is my first poem I have posted and I hope I have submitted it appropriately. Thank you again.
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Lee Ramage
Date: 7/2/2011 7:16:00 PM
Thank you Laura for your reassuring comments. This is my first poem I have posted and I hope I have submitted it appropriately. Thank you again.

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