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this mugs a foam treasure trove

see it caffineates my stove

adding sweet and moo

brought on sticky goo

sorry didnt add more clove.

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Date: 11/30/2023 5:13:00 AM
I think I would have exchanged verse 1 and 5 to pack more of a punch! Still enjoyed it!
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Richard Breese
Date: 11/30/2023 6:59:00 AM
Thanks for the advice Kim.

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