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Treasured Moments --A Collaboration--

A collaboration by Michael & The Mysterious Lady of Soup...




Nice firm pillows
   
     come snuggle in between

                                start at tip

                                                             Cascading kisses
                                                                          
                                                                    a path from top to bottom
                          
                                                                                          drowning in pleasure

Deep like the ocean

            two bodies in motion

                              continent collide

                                                                    Tasting sweet droplets

                                                                                  laying under the fruit tree

                                                                                                        fulfilling my thirst

passionsenryu

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Sarah Comstock

January 31, 2011 at 3:45 PM

What a great collaboration!!! Stunning!

Carrie Richards

January 31, 2011 at 8:50 AM

Wonderful.....and mystery just adds the excitement!! Hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm?????

Christine A Kysely

January 29, 2011 at 10:06 AM

Interesting and Mysterious!!! Love it!!! A Big 7 if you ask me!!! Christine

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

January 29, 2011 at 9:01 AM

hahaha! moi? craziest lady??? I don't even know what "crazy" means! LOL and would be honored for a collab with you in the future Michael :)-- oh wait! wasn't I doing a collab with you already as Mysterious Lady?? or not?? I am confused O_o or maybe I was just dreaming-- lol-- yup I reckon crazy is an apt description for me hahaha! & pd: want me to spell it out for you> dare I dare I??? & Michael-- sending you sunshine from my side of the world :D

Janet Wilson

January 28, 2011 at 12:05 PM

Nice poem michael..thanks.

Michael J. Falotico

January 27, 2011 at 1:49 PM

Who knows maybe next one will be with "the craziest lady of soup" lol. We all love a good mystery! I love you two! Help I'm stuck in a land where it keeps Snowing! Thanks for stopping by ladies. Xoxox. Luv Michael

Poet Destroyer A

January 27, 2011 at 12:14 PM

lol...okay Nikko, I came to check out the comment... and no i can not fill in the blanks..lol.. i'm a tupid tard... j.k./ and yes Michael... she is crazy not weird... hey but all is good... and Nikko,, your awesome... later.. p.d.

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

January 27, 2011 at 8:24 AM

treasured indeed & ooh lala what a hottie collab this is, Michael & Mysterious Lady & hahaha-- my captcha actually says "UH2U" pd :p--what are you doing?? there is a reason why Michael refers her as "Mysterious"?? as for that extra hot one in motion-- could it be that it is written by ___o somewhere______ ____r somewhere__________?? fill in the blonks oh I meant blanks :D O_o maybe...maybe not!! hahaha --- sorry Michael I am weirder today hugs

Wilma Neels

January 27, 2011 at 6:22 AM

Stunning sensual collab you two have here Mr. F!! Enjoyed this loads :) l Wilma

Allie Lusha

January 26, 2011 at 7:33 AM

very sensuous images, my kind of poem, the passion flows....Allie

Poet Destroyer A

January 25, 2011 at 5:04 PM

Well done on this collab, Michael you and your lady friend poet did it again.. .. lol...I think... i will investigate my friend Nikko... since she is mysteriously commenting every now and than.... now who's senryu is the extra hot one in motion..yours or hers.. Strong images here.. super enjoyed,,...p.d.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

January 25, 2011 at 4:05 PM

Passionate and pleasure filled read my White Knight.. kudos to u and the Mysterious Lady poet who assisted on this sensuous poem.. enjoyed by the "Sweetheart" and Jersey Girl with luv... and yes.. GO YANKEES....