Treasure Me-Collab

If I were a statue made of glass from the sea Would you gaze upon the shards to see my inner beauty I would stand up tall, gaze longingly At the sun on your face, bright as stars could be A frozen form, glistening lovingly Caress me slowly there is no hurry Yield to the cracks of times great fury Every facet, every shine, with all its beauty This statue made of treasure, glass from the sea
*And another beautiful Collab with Germaine Pasley* 6-10-12

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 8/21/2012 7:24:00 PM
This was SUHWEET. Love the collaberation--amazing job. :)
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Date: 6/20/2012 4:19:00 AM
there is no better way to start new day but with a such a well writen and romantic poems as your's,thank you Dan,my day just stared, Ivy
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Date: 6/14/2012 10:49:00 PM
Yes Danny boy, I do treasure you and assure you are definitely not a statue. Your inner beauty shines in every comment you make and I wonder what I'd do without you. This poem is a caress to all who read it! Love, Elizabeth
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Dan Kearley
Date: 6/14/2012 11:27:00 PM
;o) Thank you as always my dear... :o) For without you what would I do?
Date: 6/14/2012 3:36:00 PM
Awwwweee!!!! This is a beautiful piece, Dan. Carma
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Dan Kearley
Date: 6/14/2012 11:22:00 PM
Thanks Carma! :o)
Date: 6/13/2012 9:03:00 PM
Hiya Dan! This is a new poet, Germaine. A superb collab that makes me escape the business of the day...refreshing feel. Great job to the BOTH of ya! Gwendolen
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Dan Kearley
Date: 6/14/2012 11:21:00 PM
Well thanks,Gwendolen :o) Ya,she needs to get writing more...Ha,ha. Thanks for your kind comments,as always ;o)
Date: 6/12/2012 9:49:00 AM
very beautiful! this has a great flow to it and I love the picture it paints. I really like the last stanza's 1st 2 lines - delicate and slow and getting to know it, accepting the cracks :)
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Dan Kearley
Date: 6/14/2012 11:14:00 PM
Thank you...Very much :o)
Date: 6/12/2012 1:21:00 AM
Very delicate poem and thanks for yorr comments:)
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Dan Kearley
Date: 6/14/2012 11:12:00 PM
Thank you :o)
Date: 6/10/2012 3:52:00 PM
Going to my fav...absolutely wonderful!!!
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Dan Kearley
Date: 6/11/2012 12:26:00 AM
I am honored Jonas,Thank you very much! I hope to write more.
Date: 6/10/2012 1:29:00 PM
Yes, another beautiful collab from both of you!!!! - f.e.f. oxox love Anne-Lise
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Dan Kearley
Date: 6/11/2012 12:17:00 AM
Thank you always...Anne Lise :o) f.e.f oxox
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