Heidi Sands Poet Terzanelle

Treasure In the Mind

I saw your blue eyes, so gentle and kind
Some things we see, leave imprints in memory
Like a treasure, forever, in your mind

A gentle touch, lasts forever freely
Unexpected hugs can highlight a day
Some things we see, leave imprints in memory

We may bashfully not know what to say
So many things touch our soul and heart
Unexpected hugs can highlight a day

Distance stirs emptiness deeply, apart
Cherish all genuine, that you may share
So many things touch our soul and heart

Cast as far as you can to show you care
It’s a smile, that moment strikes, you’ll see
Cherish all genuine that you may share

Surprises are found in simplicity
I saw your blue eyes, so gentle and kind
It’s a smile, that moment strikes, you’ll see
Like a treasure, forever, in your mind


Heidi Sands  

2/26/22

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Mike Gentile March 1, 2022 at 6:55 AM Heidi, your Terzanelle is so beautiful! I love how your first impression creating a lasting memory and indeed a treasure! You crafted this so well, Happy Tuesday xxoo Heidi Sands March 1, 2022 at 6:59 AM Thank you so much Mike. Happy Tuesday ! xxoo

Joseph May February 28, 2022 at 10:00 PM This a beautiful write Heidi, an enjoyable read. Hugs Heidi Sands March 1, 2022 at 5:37 AM Thank you Joseph. I hope you have a nice day :)

Susan Lawrence February 27, 2022 at 3:41 PM I love the flow of this and the nuances Heidi ! Beautiful words … with memories of the heart . Blessings, Susan :) Heidi Sands February 27, 2022 at 4:23 PM Thank you Susan. I hope you have a nice evening. Blessings :)

Valsa George February 27, 2022 at 8:15 AM Some moments and sights are worthy to be treasured in memory! Beautifully written Heidi, conforming to the form terzanelle ! Heidi Sands February 27, 2022 at 8:36 AM Thank you Valsa. I hope you have a nice day :)

Anne-Lise Andresen February 27, 2022 at 6:17 AM - A wonderful poem, Heidi :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Heidi Sands February 27, 2022 at 6:31 AM Thank you Anne-Lise . Hugs :)

Darlene De Beaulieu February 27, 2022 at 5:55 AM Hello Heidi, I know I got a soup mail from you but you did not say what the topic was. So try again. Hugs. Darlene De Beaulieu February 28, 2022 at 11:32 AM Your welcome Heidi. Heidi Sands February 27, 2022 at 6:02 AM Ok. Thanks Darlene. :)

Alexis Y. February 26, 2022 at 5:49 PM WoW! Heidi, This is my kind of poem. I am all for anything positive. You write positivity very well. I really liked stanzas five and six. Good message. I’m adding to my favs. Have a nice evening-Alexis Heidi Sands February 27, 2022 at 5:56 AM Thank you so much Alexis. I appreciate the support and the Fave. I hope you have a great day :)

Vijay Pandit February 26, 2022 at 3:30 PM This is so heartfelt and beautiful in every way. I enjoyed the endearment your poem conveys. Excellent rhythms and flow, Heidi. Saving in my FAVES. You excel in this form. Heidi Sands February 26, 2022 at 4:41 PM I am happy to see your comment this evening, Vijay. I appreciate your kindness and it means a lot to me. I am always grateful. Thank you for the FAVE too. I hope your evening is nice :)

Jeff Kyser February 26, 2022 at 3:10 PM Very, very nice. Heidi Sands February 26, 2022 at 3:15 PM Thank you very much Jeff :)

James Marshall Goff February 26, 2022 at 2:50 PM Gently beautiful Heidi, I believe the covid shutdowns made us all more aware of the simple joys in life we share, as you so artfully express... Heidi Sands February 26, 2022 at 2:59 PM Thank you James. I hope all is well and you are having a nice day :)