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Treasure In the Mind

I saw your blue eyes, so gentle and kind
Some things we see, leave imprints in memory
Like a treasure, forever, in your mind

A gentle touch, lasts forever freely
Unexpected hugs can highlight a day
Some things we see, leave imprints in memory

We may bashfully not know what to say
So many things touch our soul and heart
Unexpected hugs can highlight a day

Distance stirs emptiness deeply, apart
Cherish all genuine, that you may share
So many things touch our soul and heart

Cast as far as you can to show you care
It’s a smile, that moment strikes, you’ll see
Cherish all genuine that you may share

Surprises are found in simplicity
I saw your blue eyes, so gentle and kind
It’s a smile, that moment strikes, you’ll see
Like a treasure, forever, in your mind


Heidi Sands  

2/26/22

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Mike Gentile

Date: 3/1/2022 6:55:00 AM

Heidi, your Terzanelle is so beautiful! I love how your first impression creating a lasting memory and indeed a treasure! You crafted this so well, Happy Tuesday xxoo

Heidi Sands
Date: 3/1/2022 6:59:00 AM

Thank you so much Mike. Happy Tuesday ! xxoo

Joseph May

Date: 2/28/2022 10:00:00 PM

This a beautiful write Heidi, an enjoyable read. Hugs

Heidi Sands
Date: 3/1/2022 5:37:00 AM

Thank you Joseph. I hope you have a nice day :)

Susan Lawrence

Date: 2/27/2022 3:41:00 PM

I love the flow of this and the nuances Heidi ! Beautiful words … with memories of the heart . Blessings, Susan :)

Heidi Sands
Date: 2/27/2022 4:23:00 PM

Thank you Susan. I hope you have a nice evening. Blessings :)

Valsa George

Date: 2/27/2022 8:15:00 AM

Some moments and sights are worthy to be treasured in memory! Beautifully written Heidi, conforming to the form terzanelle !

Heidi Sands
Date: 2/27/2022 8:36:00 AM

Thank you Valsa. I hope you have a nice day :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 2/27/2022 6:17:00 AM

- A wonderful poem, Heidi :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Heidi Sands
Date: 2/27/2022 6:31:00 AM

Thank you Anne-Lise . Hugs :)

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 2/27/2022 5:55:00 AM

Hello Heidi, I know I got a soup mail from you but you did not say what the topic was. So try again. Hugs.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 2/28/2022 11:32:00 AM

Your welcome Heidi.

Heidi Sands
Date: 2/27/2022 6:02:00 AM

Ok. Thanks Darlene. :)

Alexis Y.

Date: 2/26/2022 5:49:00 PM

WoW! Heidi, This is my kind of poem. I am all for anything positive. You write positivity very well. I really liked stanzas five and six. Good message. I’m adding to my favs. Have a nice evening-Alexis

Heidi Sands
Date: 2/27/2022 5:56:00 AM

Thank you so much Alexis. I appreciate the support and the Fave. I hope you have a great day :)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 2/26/2022 3:30:00 PM

This is so heartfelt and beautiful in every way. I enjoyed the endearment your poem conveys. Excellent rhythms and flow, Heidi. Saving in my FAVES. You excel in this form.

Heidi Sands
Date: 2/26/2022 4:41:00 PM

I am happy to see your comment this evening, Vijay. I appreciate your kindness and it means a lot to me. I am always grateful. Thank you for the FAVE too. I hope your evening is nice :)