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Treasure Chest

There are special places within my heart My heart is like a hidden treasure chest I hold on dearly, what cannot break apart A sweet place for everlasting love to rest My heart is like a hidden treasure chest Filled with shining feelings, but not gold A sweet place for everlasting love to rest I keep safe and secure new with the old Filled with shining feelings, but not gold I graciously open it whenever I choose I keep safe and secure new with the old I like to share some of it with my muse I graciously open it whenever I choose I hold on dearly, what cannot break apart I like to share some of it with my muse There are special places within my heart Heidi Sands 6/13/17

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Joseph May

Date: 7/18/2017 3:03:00 PM

A treasure chest of love...beautiful pantoum Heidi

Heidi Sands
Date: 7/18/2017 3:07:00 PM

Thank you for looking back on this one Joseph. I hope I did it right ...lol

Edward Mccall

Date: 6/15/2017 9:03:00 AM

Nicely done Heidi good luck in the contest.

Heidi Sands
Date: 6/15/2017 11:09:00 AM

Thanks so much Edward :)

Daniel Turner

Date: 6/14/2017 3:13:00 PM

Brava Heidi. Reads like a winner, Heidi

Heidi Sands
Date: 6/15/2017 11:09:00 AM

Thank you so much Daniel :)

White Wolf

Date: 6/13/2017 5:45:00 PM

This will do well in the contest, Heidi! A top notch pantoum here! Enjoy your day

Heidi Sands
Date: 6/13/2017 5:46:00 PM

Thank you White Wolf. I was just telling Chris, I am not comfortable with this form yet, but still trying. I appreciate your very kind comment! :)

Chris Green

Date: 6/13/2017 5:40:00 PM

This was gorgeous my friend. I loved everything about this. Best wishes in the contest

Heidi Sands
Date: 6/13/2017 5:46:00 PM

Hi Chris! Thank you so much. I am still not fully comfortable with this form, but still trying. I appreciate your comment and friendship , always. :)