Heidi Sands Poet Pantoum

Treasure Chest

There are special places within my heart
My heart is like a hidden treasure chest
I hold on dearly, what cannot break apart
A sweet place for everlasting love to rest

My heart is like a hidden treasure chest
Filled with shining feelings, but not gold
A sweet place for everlasting love to rest
I keep safe and secure new with the old

Filled with shining feelings, but not gold
I graciously open it whenever I choose
I keep safe and secure new with the old
I like to share some of it with my muse

I graciously open it whenever I choose
I hold on dearly, what cannot break apart
I like to share some of it with my muse
There are special places within my heart

Heidi Sands

6/13/17

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Joseph May July 18, 2017 at 3:03 PM A treasure chest of love...beautiful pantoum Heidi Heidi Sands July 18, 2017 at 3:07 PM Thank you for looking back on this one Joseph. I hope I did it right ...lol

Edward Mccall June 15, 2017 at 9:03 AM Nicely done Heidi good luck in the contest. Heidi Sands June 15, 2017 at 11:09 AM Thanks so much Edward :)

Daniel Turner June 14, 2017 at 3:13 PM Brava Heidi. Reads like a winner, Heidi Heidi Sands June 15, 2017 at 11:09 AM Thank you so much Daniel :)

White Wolf June 13, 2017 at 5:45 PM This will do well in the contest, Heidi! A top notch pantoum here! Enjoy your day Heidi Sands June 13, 2017 at 5:46 PM Thank you White Wolf. I was just telling Chris, I am not comfortable with this form yet, but still trying. I appreciate your very kind comment! :)

Chris Green June 13, 2017 at 5:40 PM This was gorgeous my friend. I loved everything about this. Best wishes in the contest Heidi Sands June 13, 2017 at 5:46 PM Hi Chris! Thank you so much. I am still not fully comfortable with this form, but still trying. I appreciate your comment and friendship , always. :)